The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Whether rapid pace of life brings more problems or more convenience largely depends on different aspects. In scientific areas, the developments do contribute to a myriad of advantages. In physiological and psychological areas, various challenges which are rare in the past have significantly emerged.
When it comes to scientific aspects, dramatic progress concerning transportation, computer technology as well as energy fields does lead to higher quality of modern life. With the popularization of private cars, people could be much more efficient in commuting and could also expand the radius of their activities, managing to enjoy pleasure in different spots such as shopping malls, amusement park and movie theaters within one day instead of being constrained in limited areas. The emergence of high-tech computers saves us from being baffled by the complex calculation, onerous word processing as well as massive information gathering, allowing us to have enough time to engender more creative ideas. Remarkable findings in energetic fields make it possible to replace traditional energy such as petroleum with renewable and environmental-friendly sources like wind, thus not only reducing pollution but also preventing the depletion of non-renewable energy source. Therefore, rapid developments of life certainly provides us with convenient life and solves numerous problems.
However, a variety of challenges have also been amplified in physiological and psychological areas such as physical health and mental stress. it is hard to ignore the fact that people are unhealthier and weaker nowadays. Immersed in convenience of home delivery service and pleasure of vedio games, an increasing number of people are much less inclined to go out of home to take exercise and breathe fresh air, which is responsible to the physical decline and low immunity among general people. Besides, a great number of people are suffering from severe depression and anxiety. rapid pace of society renders furious competitiveness and extremely high living costs, consequently driving more and more people to undertake giant pressure to keep their jobs and maintain current life. The 42-year-old manager in ZTF corporation, a famous Chinese company, committed a suicide by jumping from the building due to the dismissal.
As a result, the rapid pace of life brings us not only convenience but also challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61369863014 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15798558567 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 204.123752495 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.468620217663 131% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1015904551 57.8364921388 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190590784175 0.218282227539 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643620140564 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966864177394 0.0701772020484 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139688868611 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497682266787 0.0628817314937 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.3550499002 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.32208582834 125% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 98.500998004 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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