The increase in science and technology is accelerating the pace we live our life. Technology has helped humans to fly in the air, scale the heights of the mountains and to fathom the depth of the oceans. Life has taken a rapid pace today. More inventions and discoveries have made our life easy but at he same time to be wary of the problems that might arrive ahead of us. I mostly agree that the increasingly rapid pace of life today has caused more problems than solving it, because, of the few reasons listed below.
The advent of technology has made life easy. Many of the things are done just by a click and having the luxury of doing it from one's own residence. For example, today many people can do their professional work from home. They do not have to commute for long hours thus, making their life easy. In cities such as Mumbai where commute is not just hectic but life threatening too. Hundreds of commuters lose their life in the crowded local trains.
However, the increasingly rapid pace has also been the cause of many problems. For example, take the case of online banking. Since, online banking has started the number of fraudulent cases has increased. The increase in the cyber crimes is at an all time high and the graph does not seem to fall down. Can this problem be ascribed to technology? Fraudsters have chosen the option of easy and fast money and thus creating problems which did not exist earlier. At the moment there is no solution to this menace.
Moreover, the gravest problem that all of mankind faces today is; climate change. The prime reason responsible for climate change is rapid industrialization. Corporations, long ago started maximizing their profits and the cost of the harming the environment. Releasing harmful gases, containing the water we drink and the air we breathe. Even though, there are regulations but still the problems are increasing at an alarming rate.
To conclude, the problems are of complex nature and accordingly requires a comprise to solve the problem. The rapid pace of life has certainly made our life easy and comfortable. But, the cost of this easy life is something which our future generations are likely to pay. The problems are of complex nature and accordingly require a comprise to solve the problem. If, we are able to strike a proper balance of using the resources and technology properly, the dilemma we face, now can be subsided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'at the same'?
Suggestion: at the same
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ample, take the case of online banking. Since, online banking has started the number ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...complex nature and accordingly requires a comprise to solve the problem. The rapid pace of...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58173766726 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6156196559 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438334019328 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107179577717 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138901233734 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227352191083 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161982066475 0.0667264976115 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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