An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
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Vitamin A is one of the most vital nutrients. Deficiency of vitamin A causes millions of child blindness, night blindness, and many other diseases. So, governments' one of the most important job in the health sector is to find a solution to vitamin A deficiency. Fortification of staple food is always preffered in nutrition science. So, this fortification program can produce the best result we can expect to fight vitamin A deficiency in Tagus.
The common method of reducing vitamin A deficiency in the population is to give a vitamin A capsule to every under-5 children every six months. But a lot of parents and children are reluctant about taking this supplementation. So, a large number of children cannot receive vitamin A capsule regularly. And these programs does not target people older than five years. So, older people also develop vitamin A deficiency. Scientists never considered giving vitamin A capsules to older people. So only other option so far is to fortify their regular food items. And millet is the food that is consumed by most of the people of Tagus every day. So, when vitamin A is present in millet, it would reduce vitamin A deficiency in substantial portion.
Most of the countries developed a law to fortify salt with iodine. It almost eradicated iodine deficiency from the face of the earth. Because no one can eat a meal without salt. So, when consuming salt ensures iodine consumption, it eradicates iodine defiiency. In the same way, when people of Tagus have enough vitamin A in millet, the food they eat every day, would obviously reduce this vitamin's deficiency.
As the government is ready to subsidy and popularize this fortified millet, it wouldn't be a problem to spred this special millet to among the dining tables of general population. These kind of invention usually fails, when it is costly and no one is ready subsidy. But in Tagus, the government want to subsidy. And if local agricultural offices make it easy to collect seeds of this new type of millet, farmars would start to grow it and it would be available at the local markets. As it is subsidized, the price would not increase, and as a lot of farmers are producing it, people would purchase this millet.
Though it can taste differenctly, in that case, if people do not like the taste, government may have to make a law to make the farmers grow it and subsidy more to reduce the price lower than the normal millet.
With all these considerations, I think, government is going to be successful to reduce vitamin A deficiency among the people of Tagus by promoting vitamin A rich millet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... about taking this supplementation. So, a large number of children cannot receive vitamin A capsu...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A capsule' or simply 'capsules'?
Suggestion: A capsule; Capsules
...entists never considered giving vitamin A capsules to older people. So only other option s...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... deficiency from the face of the earth. Because no one can eat a meal without salt. So,...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vitamins'' or 'vitamin's'?
Suggestion: vitamins'; vitamin's
... every day, would obviously reduce this vitamins deficiency. As the government is rea...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...nd popularize this fortified millet, it wouldnt be a problem to spred this special mill...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...he dining tables of general population. These kind of invention usually fails, when it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84080717489 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77724140804 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468609865471 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0821242733 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0384615385 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19230769231 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31755164082 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841668742487 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678676105695 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168186184251 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591563712361 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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