An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
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Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Vitamins and minerals play an imperative role in the earth system. They similarly, also play a role in the human body. Humans need vitamins and minerals to live a healthy life. For instance, vitamin A is known to be a popular source for people with eye sight problems. Minerals such as iron, magnesium among others also play a salient part in everyday life. Today, people consume these minerals, acids, fats and vitamins in form of tablets and syrups and powders. However, not every person on planet earth can afford owing to several economic and geopolitical conditions. Therefore, genetic engineering of grains has been a popular field of study in science. Since the 1960s, a new trend of breeding plants together to produce newer varieties of rice, wheat and several grains has been observed. This prompt above suggests a similar solution to the problem of vitamin A deficiency among the people of Tagus. This new millet, developed by international development organization is being promoted as a viable option for the impoverished people of Tagus. The prompt further, believes that since millet is a staple food in Tagus, it will be adopted without much hesitation by the public. However, in doing so the prompt ignores several factors that needs to be considered.
To begin, environmental conditions of each country on our planet differs. For instance, India has Himalayans in the north; desert in the west and ocean in the south. Such disparate geographical locations lead to different climate, winds, and soil patterns. Therefore, not every plant can be grown everywhere. For example, cocoa can only be grown in the southern hills of Kerala in India whereas, mangroves can only be found in the Sundarbans delta and not all over India. Hence, it is significant for the international development organization to consider the geographical factors before introducing the millet in the Tagus market. Suppose, the millet does not grow appropriately as expected or some unforeseen confounding factor arises; this will not only lead to waste of time but also monetary funds and trust of people.
Second, before introducing the millet in the market it is important to ease the general public of the Tagus into the idea of a new breed of millet. One cannot discard the possibility of people rejecting the millet, especially those of religious and conservative attitude. Moreover, this will cause farmers also to abandon the new millet as it will not yield productive results.
The international development organization should also keep in mind the adaptability of the millet. For example, if the millet does not suit the body of the population of Tagus. It has been found that many people are unable to digest millets such as wheat properly and this leads to upsetting of their stomach. Therefore, a pilot study will need to be conducted on the people of Tagus.
These are sum of the things that need to be looked into, before introducing the millet in the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
... to be a popular source for people with eye sight problems. Minerals such as iron, magnes...
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Line 1, column 518, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to owe'.
Suggestion: to owe
...every person on planet earth can afford owing to several economic and geopolitical co...
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Line 2, column 825, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso monetary funds and trust of people. Second, before introducing the millet in...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... the market it is important to ease the general public of the Tagus into the idea of a new bre...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...introducing the millet in the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05091649695 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7792714706 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503054989817 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6833158444 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5357142857 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406651190337 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984852694252 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894832968649 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213332853488 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918386636969 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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