It is dangerous to trust intelligence.
It is true that different people interpret the materials in different way.It depends on their education or upbringing to react on certain things. Intelligence is a weapon which can used for both construction as well as destruction. somewhere it is true that a criminal who is intelligent is more dangerous than stupid or dumb criminal.
But, It is not entirely true to not trust intelligence, For example when an apple fell on newton's head while he was sitting under tree the gravity was discovered. Which in-turn helped to discover a variety of things.
In modern era, where there are so many crimes going on we trust our police departments to solve them. They use their intelligence to help the people. Nowadays the technology is so advanced that there are new inventions which make our day to day life much easier. As we know how AI has become the leading technology with the help of AI(Artificial intelligence) scientists have created different types of robots which helps to simplify the tasks to perform.
Finally, we can say from the above examples that its not dangerous to trust intelligence. There are lot of advantages when your dealing with intelligence. It depends on whom and what you are trusting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...nterpret the materials in different way.It depends on their education or upbringin...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...on which can used for both construction as well as destruction. somewhere it is true that ...
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Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Somewhere
...th construction as well as destruction. somewhere it is true that a criminal who is intel...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... under tree the gravity was discovered. Which in-turn helped to discover a variety of...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h make our day to day life much easier. As we know how AI has become the leading t...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...gence. There are lot of advantages when your dealing with intelligence. It depends o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, while, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96097560976 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87261164795 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 704.065955056 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5408676261 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216628564055 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716044944691 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112982929654 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142241304786 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125461388465 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.