Intelligence is very demanding nowadyas to proceed in the respective fields. With increase in the competition, intelligence is playing a very crucial role to identify the best condidates for a given task. Intellignece could be dangerous if it is being used for something negative or to deltroy something/someone.
Firstly, Intelligence could be very helpful in mundane life. In this advance world where mundane activities can be perfomed so easily unlike before. All this has become possible because of the intellegnece which resulted in new innovation which solved the basic problems for daily life so that, we can think of the bigger goal rather than getting involved with the niche tasks.
Furthermore, Intellignece can also help one to achieve success or to reach the acme. With the given competition, intelligence could be very helpful for one to get one's dream. for example, in GRE test, one has to be very focused and understand the problem and use the intelligence to the coorect answer. I fail to understand, how can intelligence which is so important and so helpful be dangerous for oneself.
Finally, sometimes people tend to use their intellignece to eradicate or impair the society, community, beliefs etc. But one should never forget the only people with positive thought can beat these people with their positive energy and intellignece. FOr example, Osama bin laden considered as very intelligent was using his idea to destroy many countries just to spread the fear in people. He was disseminated because of his terrifying attacks. But on the other hand, Obama, U.S. former persident, used his right mind to capture Osama and put the terror to an end.
In the end, Intelligence plays a very vital role in a person life. Sometimes people do tend to use it for negetive purposes but there will always be other who can destroy this negetive acts with the positive intelligence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...e of the intellegnece which resulted in new innovation which solved the basic problems for dai...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...very helpful for one to get ones dream. for example, in GRE test, one has to be ver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09935897436 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92550611781 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7921561087 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0284449737187 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00944403570469 0.0831039109588 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171330744212 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0186611405223 0.150359130593 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107408643041 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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