New ideas are must in order to have new technologies which will eventually result in developement. Most if the times the new ideas get critisized because these ideas are not so novel and have already been attempted and failed. Sometimes the ideas one get is not as fruitful as one thought, in such cases criticism and scrutinizing the substantiate the idea. But most of the idea gets critisized because societies dont want to comly with the major changes in thier lives.
I agree when one starts with something new goal or idea, which is unconventional, generaly gets criticized by societies and communities because human kind do not like much of a change in the idea or belief which they have following for so long. For example, in small villages of India, most of the fathers don't want their duaghter to study much because they believe that her study will make her indecorous. Sorrounded by such traditions, if one tries to get her daughter to study and pursue a higher degree gets critisized severely. But if one needs to persistent to get what they have dreamt of.
I remember the mockery people used to make of the idea of automated car, flights
, etc. in future few decades and centuries ago. It is result of ones preservance that we have got flights which has now brought communities much closer. In early days of flights, noone was ready to travel through flights. But with time, our communities and societies do get used to these changes.
In the end, I agree sometimes ideas needs to be criticized which encourages one to think it through and shape the idea in a better way. But to drive the result to ab successful end one must never give up.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- Green tea has long been hailed as an excellent source of antioxidants, powerful anti-aging and immune-system boosting compounds. Many people therefore believe that the more cups they consume each day, the greater the benefits. Green tea, however, contains 63
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
- An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p 66
- "It is dangerous to trust only intelligence." 39
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69863013699 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61260067799 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0872355436 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135213682149 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504120638119 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474148159388 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806807686167 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400543786473 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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