It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d

When I say "I believe in myself" half of the problems vanish. As long as our beliefs are right it is harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them. Self confidence and self respect are two very important parameters in one's life. The will to conquer the world comes from the people who have always trusted and believed in themselves. The greatest example that I would like to site here is of Albert Einstein. He believed in his own theories although the world ridiculed him to be a school dropout.Today all of the great scientists follow his doctrines. It all drops down to how we perceive ourselves. The aphorism "And if I asked you to name everything that you liked, how long would you take to name yourself" speaks for itself

Although said so, if any of our own beliefs are baleful then one should let go or compromise on those beliefs. Although Adolf Hitler believed his tyrannical ways were appropriate it was extremely baleful. Understanding what beliefs should be adhered to and passed on and which ones should be compromised are extremely important in one's life.

A person who believes in himself/herself but compromises them just to please others would be doing much more harm to their own selves than others.

With this I would conclude saying that once we know our own beliefs and feel positively of them, compromising them would definitely be more harmful. Although said this cannot be taken as a general statement and it would be wise to ponder on the other aspect too. What if our beliefs are superfluous? Are they still worth adhering to? Think about it!

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84476534296 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74186240231 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5264042285 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279897054647 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729548820062 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889505320222 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152462861128 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445568580493 0.0667264976115 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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