IT IS NO LONGER POSSIBLE FOR A SOCIETY TO REGARD ANY LIVING MAN OR WOMAN AS A HERO
To entitle someone as hero in real life is not as easy as in a movie or an act, it depends on who we call a hero and what we see in a hero, what we expect from a hero? For every individual definition of hero is different so one cannot judge easily in who’s perspective who is a hero. So to determine a individual as a hero what we should look for? He/she possess some noble characteristics? Or should they have super hero powers? This again depends upon what an individual characterize as a hero. In my opinion I strongly disagree with the prompt as one cannot judge what criteria an individual takes into priority to characterize a person as a hero and it is possible to regard an individual as a hero for the following reasons.
To begin with, if a father of a child who is impecunious and could not fulfill his Childs basic needs such as education, food, leisure activities etc due to lack of employment and spends his personal life savings for his Childs needs then that affection for his child is very praise worthy and the child himself sees a hero figure in his father which I said earlier everyone characterize there own hero as per there own priorities and perception. So does that mean that his father is an hero figure? Yes because until and unless everyone is not aware about the individuals good deed society could not judge his character as a hero but that doesn’t mean that he is not a hero or have does not have characteristics of a hero.
Simply showing more love and affection to others or our loved ones doesn’t mean an individual is a hero in everyone’s perception, so for example if a team of scientist who creates a space rocket which contains a satellite in it and which is very important for the space organization to be launched in space, so if they launch it in space and the tedious mission is successful after hard and enduring efforts then whom would we characterize as heroes of the mission? The mission head? Or each and every person related to the mission? In my perception each and every person associated with the mission are equally creditable and are heroes in there own way because they are satisfied with there work which is noble and demanding. As I said an individual or society cannot infer whom to call a hero but that doesn’t make it impossible.
To call one individual a hero because he/she saved the city from evil like we see in movies and acts does seem like judging good and bad but it is not an benchmark to entitle someone as a hero rather its just an idea how to visualize a hero, to conclude I will say that whom to regard as a hero depends upon each individual if an individual has done good deeds to himself, his loved ones or for the society his noble effort will be recognized and praised by the society and characterize him as an hero figure.
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... by the society and characterize him as an hero figure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49323017408 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71479786817 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417794970986 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.391420723 60.3974514979 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.1875 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3125 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18876204152 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074536017304 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485237205482 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130736511257 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347355660078 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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