SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT CORPORATIONS HAVE A RESPONSIBILITY TO PROMOTE THE WELL-BEING OF THE SOCIETIES AND ENVIRONMENTS IN WHICH THEY OPERATE. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THE ONLY RESPONSIBILITY OF CORPORATIONS, PROVIDED THEY OPERATE WITHIN THE LAW, IS TO MAKE AS MUCH MONEY AS POSSIBLE.
A corporation is a body which is in a way directly responsible for the development of the society and could be resembled as the reinforcement of the society. Corporation operates under a environment which is closely monitored by the civilians and if there are any deviations in the work ethics of the corporation, then there are chances that it could ruin the environment of the society. I partially agree with the prompt as per my perspective due to following reasons.
First and the foremost, I partially agree with the prompt that the corporations plays a major role in shaping the environment and aiming for the well being of the society. For instance, municipal corporation of Ahmedabad city is very active and prompt in taking actions for the society, to delineate that with an example, metro work is currently going on in the city of Ahmedabad and there are road closures in many areas, to counter the traffic the corporation has restricted the roads and the two way roads are temporarily declared as one way. So the action taken on time in fact works as a catalyst and minimizes the inconveniences.
Further, I partially disagree with the prompt that corporation should operate within law to make as much amount of money as possible, as the corporation is for the people and by the people so the main aim of the corporation should be to deliver the society the best service as possible irrespective to the amount of money it makes, though money is an majorly important factor but it should not be the driving factor. For instance if the city has an very good infrastructure but is very conjusted in terms of traffic then alternate means of transportation's are must and for which adequate steps should taken, here money should be the second priority as this is the fundamental requirement for the city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the society. Corporation operates under a environment which is closely monitored ...
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Line 9, column 349, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ount of money it makes, though money is an majorly important factor but it should ...
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Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng factor. For instance if the city has an very good infrastructure but is very co...
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Line 9, column 602, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have taken' or 'take'?
Suggestion: have taken; take
...ust and for which adequate steps should taken, here money should be the second priori...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84294871795 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93785624947 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477564102564 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.5407654 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.875 118.986275619 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159997797003 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733376309583 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642785256362 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113958324532 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427441466882 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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