The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given bar chart illustrates the production and consumption rate of electricity in billion kilo-watt unit of the top ten countries in the world in the year of 2014.

Overall, in terms of maximum electricity production china is leading the front followed by united states of America, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, brazil, Germany and republic of Korea respectively. And in terms of maximum usage also china is leading succeeded by United States of America, Russia, Japan, India, Germany, Canada, France, Brazil and Korea republic respectively.

All the countries except Germany are producing a surplus amount of electricity in which united states of America is producing a surplus amount of 233 billion KWh electricity leading in front followed by India generating a surplus amount of 173.20 billion KWh succeeded by Canada producing a surplus of 119 billion KWh of electricity followed by china, Russia, Japan, France, brazil and Korea republic producing a surplus amount of less than 100 billion KWh of electricity. On the contrary, Germany is consuming 582.5 billion KWh of electricity and only producing 526.6 KWh of electricity and is deficit of 55.9 billion KWh of electricity.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... and consumption rate of electricity in billion kilo-watt unit of the top ten countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38624338624 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89517118336 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.210997796 43.030603864 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.6 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158353633501 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126150023463 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163727134655 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183056958521 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189216685767 0.0819641961636 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.2329268293 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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