It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The question of asking what is the deifintion of a hero and who belongs to it can be raised and its answers can be varied depending on each individuals. The author suggests that it is no longer viable for a society to regard one as a hero. However, in my opinion, I mostly disagree to the suggestion for following couple of reasons.
Many of us forget the meaning of hero these days and probabably regard super-heros for constituting most part of heros. Due to intriguing public media like novels or movies, especially somewhat younger people imagine of so-called super heros -- spiderman, superman as such -- for the archetype of a hero. However, they forget the real heros are the ones living very close inside our reality. For instance, during the difficult pandemic era caused by COVID-19, many personnel who worked in hospitals and medical agencies spent tons of toil and sweat trying to defend citizens from the malignant virus. Nurses and doctors had to wear a heavy, burdensome anti-disease defendant clothes whether it's cold or hot and take care of patients for ever long hours. Indeed, if we do not take these generous and thankful people into account for being a hero than who shall we?
Surely, other than regarding these most obvious public-working individuals in such a harsh times, we can also think of more general person to each one as a hero. For instance, a hero can be your friendly neighbor living right next to one. When a family has some help required in some circumstances, these people can offer you help in need. Suggest for example, a family is going out of town for a summer vacation, but since they have to take an airplane and can not take their pets alongside with them they have to find someone to take care of their pets. To some not regarding, this can be a minor issue but for the family, this can be a important issue which must be solved. If by some chance their neighbor can take care of their pets and also resolve some house choirs like watering the garden while the family is gone, wouldn't the neighbors be regarded as a hero?
Many people think that heros should very clearly be shown or be famous like a popular people who receives media's attention. Indeed, heros can be milionaires who spend huge money on foundations like UN beneficial foundation for underdevleoped or the Red Cross. Yet, people tend to forget the value of those living close to us, who has more probability of becoming a hero in many actual real-life situations. In sum, I acclaim that there is still a high chance of finding our society's hero living nearby us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun personnel seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much personnel', 'a good deal of personnel'.
Suggestion: much personnel; a good deal of personnel
...ficult pandemic era caused by COVID-19, many personnel who worked in hospitals and medical age...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'time'?
Suggestion: time
...lic-working individuals in such a harsh times, we can also think of more general pers...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r issue but for the family, this can be a important issue which must be solved. I...
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Line 3, column 825, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ng the garden while the family is gone, wouldnt the neighbors be regarded as a hero? ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68653421634 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54331014989 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4604574153 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.736842105 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8421052632 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195884188486 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702299070607 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431119399356 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128441989411 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282900222264 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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