It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public
This topic upraises the controversial issue of whether any leader take the opinion from public or not.Indisputably, if when any leader try to take some opine from their plebeian then sometimes unwanted situation may occur which is like its human tendency not to come at a point while many man tries to give many opinion.Nevertheless, if any leader try to do what is necessary for his nation and accord rule according to pepole's side, then it must be done to take opinion from common people.Thus, i generally disagree with opinion that taking general people opinion may destroy any political view and concur that political homogenity will be acquired by taking plebeian's opinion.
First of all, in a democratic nation it;s quite inevitable that without taking general people opinion any leader or nation can not be uphold.I would like to point out that public;s mind set be consider first.To illustrate let us take an example , any democratic country a nations leader is chosen by their plebeian,so if any leader didn't heed any attention to their nations common people then it is quite desirable that next time he/she wont be elected.In this, circumstance, it is inevitable to people's opine.Consequently ,it;s pretty ineluctable to take what any general public support.
Furthermore, if any patrician or aristocrat take decision only using his conscience then it must follow the idea of autocracy and oppressive dictatorship may established. specifically , public want their nation to be run by what they want and what they need.moreover, any leader can also make good judgement if they people thoughts is coagulated. So, both shrewdness and savior faire have told us that political sembalance have established on a rock solid structure of people;s opinion.
Admittedly, it's also incumbent to any leader show his own canny in the critical situation while emergency is needed. This is plausible when decision have to take for international affair rather than any national one.In addition shrewedness and uncanny power of any govt leader can also be established by avoiding plutonian view in exigency situation.However, only above argument doesn't constitute a ample support to claim that only leader opinion is the key base to nation augment because sometimes all leader can not take prolific intrepid decision.
In termination, although many intrepid leader sometimes shows their courage through critical time but in general only their own mental stress could not make political uniformity.As long as nation;s balance is considered then common people's opinion also play a fruitful role
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32195121951 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03446598059 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.862353992 60.3974514979 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.75 118.986275619 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 23.4991977007 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.375 5.21951772744 352% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144892788793 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617925646445 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405271768843 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850930200853 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338342903379 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 14.1392134831 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 48.8420337079 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.1743820225 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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