It is primarily in the cities that a nation s culture traditions are generated and preserved

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It is primarily in the cities that a nation's culture traditions are generated and preserved.

Generally in a just established country, there is a predominance of the towns and villages in its area rather than large cosmopolitan areas. The Culture and Traditions developed in these areas originate and then later on as the economic and industial growth of the nations give rise to giant urban sections of the country.

Towns and Villages are the generators of Traditions and Cultures of a country as the the development of the settelment starts with Villages. To provide a proof, Ganesh Chatruthi(One of the Biggest Festival Celebrated across India) was started by Lokmanya Tilak, A prominant freedom fighter for the Indian Independance. He started celebrating Ganesh Chaturthi publically in his home town village of Chikhali( A Village in Ratnagiri Disctrict of India). Now this festival is celebrated all across India with rally of people carrying drums across the cities just to visit their beloved God.
Many festivals bring along the element of pollution as a part of the festivities. There is a total conundrum across the cities so city administration set regulations and restrictions in the urban areas to avoid the unforseen nuiscence caused by the festivities. this problem is not applicable is town and village areas as the population is very less in comparison to the cities. To illustrate this, celebration of Holi ( A prominant festival in Indian culture realted to Colours and Water) where people apply colour powder on one another and splash water causes a lot of water and air pollution so to control this, Government has made special zones to celebfrate the festival in particular cosmopolitan areas.
Accepting that fact that amount of people that celebrate the festivals and traditions in city areas is more than that of the Rural/Village areas, it cannot be denied that still the percentage of people following the Culture and traditions in the Village are more than that of the city areas due to freedom of celebration and quick acceptance of traitions as its the place of origin.

To conclude my point, Nation's culture and traditions are enjoyed by the cities on a large sacle but the generation and preservation could be accounted under the works of rustic areas of the country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, then, as to, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09944751381 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91045402838 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502762430939 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9786265798 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.833333333 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231775295156 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879084912562 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11013285029 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155859191724 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109211567077 0.0667264976115 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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