It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves,
I strongly disapprove that it is through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. As far as I concerned, only the person oneself can define his or her identification.
With the dominance of social media controlling our social life in this modern world, it is highly that teenagers will easily affect by what others think about he or she. For example, Facebook allows people to share their own opinions towards anything in the public platform. Hence, if one has complaint about the specific person , it might be possible for him to share his opinion online without revealing his true identity. Consequently, people might have a bias toward this person. Progressively, the bias toward the guy exists everywhere, which might influence the way this person look at himself if this guy discover the bias with which others always look at him.
However, life is short and precious. What’s more it is irreversible. Many people now don’t care how other think themselves. Instead, they are confident and not afraid of being authentic. For example, some males may be somewhat feminine in his behavior. Thus, they might be ridiculed by others because of the stereotype that dominates the mainstream society. However, they don’t care what others judge them because they know only being authentic to themselves can their life become more fulfilling.
Additionally, only the person oneself can determine how to live an enjoyable life and his own future, as well as his own values. For example, you have the right to decide which person he would like to get acquainted with. Hence, if somebody doesn’t share the same value with you, it is totally fine for you to keep distance with him so that you won’t be affect by how he look at you. Consequently, identification is not necessarily decided by others. The right for defining ourselves is held in our hand.
All in all, our identification is not related to others, it should be decided by our own. Only ourselves can define our roles in society and take control of our own fate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... distance with him so that you won’t be affect by how he look at you. Consequently, ident...
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...iety and take control of our own fate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98546511628 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74084908892 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4532093854 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229800757152 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761893768272 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140238461671 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173259382381 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153833407902 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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