It is through the use of logic and precise, careful measurement that we become aware of our progress. Without such tools, we have no reference points to indicate how far we have advanced or retreated.
The author asserts the importance of logic and careful measurement in the assessment of our progress. While I agree with this notion of using logic in measuring our progress I do not comply with the extremity of the argument that without logic we have no reference point to indicate our advancement of retreatment. Logic is indeed a very important tool but not everything in this earth can be measured by logic. There is place for emotion and humanity, which make us humans in the first place. We are able to use both parts of our brain as left cerebral cortex for logic and right cerebral cortex for emotion or creativity.
,
We are in the era of globalization through technological advancement. Seeing through logic the world is moving forwards and inventing new things and in the scale of measurement we will surely ace, be it in the medical science, food production, industrialization or adaptation of different technology in daily life to make it easier. The the question remains are we really advancing when we look around us and see the poverty, corruption, mal nutrition and inhumane selfish activities of people which causes distress to other people but logically thinking it is the correct way to be. There are several stories of back stabbing, corruption and keep other people directly or indirectly in danger which we cannot impute with logical flaws but rather a impaired human features.
Let us take an high school student for example who is bad at every class which incorporates mathematical computation but he has a extraordinary knack for aesthetics, arts ad crafts. We cannot regard that student as retreated rather he is advanced in other arena of creativity which cannot be measured in precise and careful scale. The subjectivity of arts need to be realized and feel connected about. The set of right and wrong answer life that of logic does not work here.
It is true nor a nation, world or even a singular human life should not be led entirely without opting out logic. That overall structure will collapse that way. Logic can be the primary guide of any course of action which we call critical thinking but the result of the action cannot be measured based on logic. Logically thinking the predicaments of using nuclear weapon in second world war was a prudent move on parts of America to end the war but will the maimed population of Japan will agree with it or does the humanity support the crippling of generations.
In sum, logic being predominant in defining the humanities prosperity should not be the case entirely just like the case human brain which has provision for both logic and creativity the world should also be measured in such way by maintaining a nuance balance between both subjectivity and objectivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ment in the assessment of our progress. While I agree with this notion of using logic...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bral cortex for emotion or creativity. , We are in the era of globalization th...
^^
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al cortex for emotion or creativity. , We are in the era of globalization throu...
^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
...nology in daily life to make it easier. The the question remains are we really advancin...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
...nology in daily life to make it easier. The the question remains are we really advancin...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 748, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ot impute with logical flaws but rather a impaired human features. Let us tak...
^
Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feature'?
Suggestion: feature
...gical flaws but rather a impaired human features. Let us take an high school student...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mpaired human features. Let us take an high school student for example who is ...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tes mathematical computation but he has a extraordinary knack for aesthetics, art...
^
Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humanities'' or 'humanity's'?
Suggestion: humanities'; humanity's
...logic being predominant in defining the humanities prosperity should not be the case entir...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, while, for example, it is true, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91006423983 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78041541438 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526766595289 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8509137131 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.388888889 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9444444444 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308423571336 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987565073774 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972824122659 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161313365203 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105879013274 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.