Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Law is made for the safety purpose of any country whole over the world. If this law become flexible then there would be create a turmoil situation in the society which have bad impact for the every nations of the country. So, I am disagree with the recommended statements.
Firstly, Law should be equal to every person so that every person can be included in judgement when they involve in any social prohibited crimes. But in some places it is seen that after making the general law flexible, the rate of the criminal activities increasing more vigorously. For instance, the city of the Lakpara besides Nepal, where law mad flexible to powerful people so that they can be protected from their crime. However, after that this crime rate increased more as they got chance to do that and they know that they could not get punished. Consequently it created a noisy situation in the society.
Secondly, law should not become flexible in every situation. If law become easier that people can get rid of after doing unsocial work then they can become more ferocious and it leads a debauchery life in our society which break peaceful of our life. For example, young people are arrested for disturbing young girls and sometimes it is seen that girls are having suicide for this types of bullying and teasing because they can not share their problem with anyone. This criminal youth are getting rid of from serious punishment. But if this youth are not punished strongly then we can not handle this situation.
Thirdly, in many times there are several government comes and they make new law by their power. But there should be a stable conduct of law because a new board member can not adjust with the changed law sometimes and this can make a noisy situation for the present ruler of law.
In sum, law should not be made flexible as it can create social prohibited activities which is bad for our society. Moreover, we should not be given priority for powerful person to do by get rid them from punishment. Law should be more strong to every person equally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37106398995 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463888888889 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.498597062 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160192094238 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621698257528 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445845035507 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114923613895 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371331743395 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.