Essay topics:
Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Government plays a vital roles in every country because all the rules and initiatives to run any country is systemized by them. I believe that government should compromise with public opinion in some specific cases and they must remember that they should not break their rules.
A ruler of any country has a lots of duties to their nations so that they can give every nations a good balanced life. Some rules are very important to maintain to create a healthy environments in society. For example, there are punishments for unsocial works done against our society but sometimes it is seen that some rich and powerful person can deny the rules and break the rules but governments make their path easy to help them. Consequently is this situation government would be discredit by the nations which is shameful for the any ruler and also brings bad situations in society.
Moreover, in some situation governments need to break the norms which was constructed for the countries and definitely it brings good initiatives to every nations. For, example in 1990 drought season in the Chittagong village, people are out of sufficient water storage and they are seeking for pure water. In fact many people got rich for water resources. But when village people offer the governments of the village to use the near water Dam to use as a water source to save their life. Even though using dam was restricted in law of governments , government of that village allowed them to use the Dam as the sources of water storage,. After that decisions, it saves many people lives.
In addition there are many ruler who many times strict to their opinions and also sometimes gave priority on public opinions. For example the father of nation in Bangladesh Bangabandhu Seikh Muzibur Rahman , he always kind to public but he only allowed the people agreements when that was constructive and better for his country. Furthermore, he always was strict ruler when it needs for the betterment of every nations. So he was perfect example of the world for his norms.
In sum, in some special cases a wise ruler strict to his rules which made for the peaceful situation of the society and people should respect that. Again, sometimes it is seen that the same ruler can also take public opinion to make a betterment of our generations. Thus, both cases are good reason for the public in any country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
Government plays a vital roles in every country because all the rules ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mized by them. I believe that government should compromise with public opinion in...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...heir rules. A ruler of any country has a lots of duties to their nations so that they...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'environment'?
Suggestion: environment
...portant to maintain to create a healthy environments in society. For example, there are puni...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ents make their path easy to help them. Consequently is this situation government would be d...
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... situation governments need to break the norms which was constructed for the coun...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dam was restricted in law of governments , government of that village allowed them...
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Suggestion: , .
... the Dam as the sources of water storage,. After that decisions, it saves many peo...
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Suggestion: addition,
...isions, it saves many people lives. In addition there are many ruler who many times str...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun ruler seems to be countable; consider using: 'many rulers'.
Suggestion: many rulers
...ny people lives. In addition there are many ruler who many times strict to their opinions...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gladesh Bangabandhu Seikh Muzibur Rahman , he always kind to public but he only al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s kind to public but he only allowed the people agreements when that was construc...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...better for his country. Furthermore, he always was strict ruler when it needs for the bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8230958231 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54125165216 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464373464373 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.460910369 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.315789474 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122459490405 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435097574404 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323648479403 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765263382112 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191554503488 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.