Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are defined as sets of codes that guides and help shapen the society. Many government argue that laws should be rigid, while some are of the opinion that laws should be considered based on different circumstances. In my opinion, laws should not be fixed, rather, they should be flexible enough to accommodate disparate conditions and times, as such differences, are significant characteristic of any society.
To start with, there have been rigid laws set up for strict obedience to guide moral behaviour in the society. For example, The pick pocket, Donna Dodgers, who argued his case in the 1980 court based on his prevailing situation of being an orphan and in a state of penury. If the law were to be flexible, the man would have gone away with the crime. Thereby, causing a disruption in the safety of the community. Thus, rigid laws could be beneficial.
However, since the society is being shaped by various circumstances such as education, culture, norms, religion, among others, I believe laws should also be flexible to accommodate those. In the early 19s, rape cases were not regarded as offence and hence there was no rule indicting such offenders. However, as women became more educated and have proper knowledge of rights, the law has been modified to convict any man guilty of such violation. If the law were to be as rigid as the one in the 19s, there would not be this kind of progress in the society.
In addition, codes are to be flexible based on the time and places of any crime being committed. In the murder case of Canti in the History book authored by Judy. Lady Ann had killed the man in self-defence after he allegedly attempted to rape her. The law guiding this is definitely different from the case of hitman Roy, who was later known to be the cause of mysterious dissappearances of prominent Mayors in the District of Colorado in 2001. In this case, the law that judges the murder cases here are made flexible based on circumstances, places, and times.
In conclusion, laws are better made flexible to minister to the ever dynamic changes, circumstances featured in many societies today. By so doing, there would be no constraint in obedience,, and would allow for societal changes which is definitely indicative of growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85309278351 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72505814935 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9095736575 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178193866588 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057842665964 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442461700909 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10639814453 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213293178791 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.