memoir
The article states that the memoir of Chevair written by himself was distorted just to make his life more appealing . Three reasons are provided to support this claim. However, the professor disagreed, casting doubts on each of the given reasons.
First, the reading claims that the memoir depicting Chevair as wealthy was not true since he got all the money he spent on gambling from a loan service. The professor refutes this claim by stating that the man was not poor as the writer had depicted. In reality, he had properties which he sold for money. However, it took long for him to get the money for the sale, which is usually how such sales occur in Switzerland. Thus, he had to get a loan to spend till he has access to the money from properties.
Second, the reading mentions that the acclaimed detailed conversations of the Chevailier with the famous writer, Voltaire, could not be as accurate as it was portrayed in the memoir. The professor casts doubt on this claim by affirming that the man did write down conversations with Voltaire, particularly, every single night. Witnesses also confirmed that they saw him referring to such notes while he writes the memoir a couple of times.
Third, the article posits that the memoir account of his escape from the Vernice’ prison is distorted and untrue. The professor, however, mentions that release through bribery is very unlikely, since other prisoners with more relationship with the wards did not have such advantage of been granted a bail. The professor also mentions the availabilty of a document that talks about the repair of the ceiling in his room. This supported the fact that he must have escaped, not through bribe, but by cutting through the ceiling.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ted just to make his life more appealing . Three reasons are provided to support t...
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...claim. However, the professor disagreed, casting doubts on each of the given reas...
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...arly, every single night. Witnesses also confirmed that they saw him referring to...
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Suggestion:
...rted and untrue. The professor, however, mentions that release through bribery is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89115646259 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53708829303 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4334319525 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169089527158 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612482175885 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872990920015 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116777536414 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495168230655 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ted just to make his life more appealing . Three reasons are provided to support t...
^^
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...claim. However, the professor disagreed, casting doubts on each of the given reas...
^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arly, every single night. Witnesses also confirmed that they saw him referring to...
^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rted and untrue. The professor, however, mentions that release through bribery is...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89115646259 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53708829303 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4334319525 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169089527158 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612482175885 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872990920015 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116777536414 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495168230655 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.