Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are rules made by a certain society. One must abide by these laws if they are to live in that society. The prompt recommends that laws should not be rigid but be accommodating of various circumstances, times, and places. I mostly agree with the recommendation because different times need different laws and multicultural societies need laws that need to take account of the variety of people living in those societies.
While laws should be modifiable in most of the circumstances, some specific cases may differ. Especially, when there is no law in society. In total anarchy, rigid law is better than no law. For example, after the war was over in Vietnam, Bangladesh, etc countries, no nationwide law was created overnight. The only thing that stopped the anarchy from rising, is the regional and cultural law system existing in those areas. While these laws are not applicable to a wide variety of people and certainly not applicable for all circumstances, they at provided the temporary support to keep peace in those societies. Similar issues may occur anywhere in the world and such rigid laws may still play the role of keeper of the peace. But as those laws don't encompass all situations, times, or places, they are not applicable when a society becomes stable. A stable society needs flexible laws that are multifaceted and can be applied even if times, circumstances and places change.
As time progresses, generations change. Each generation has its own moral and social values and ideas of right and wrong. But laws should not be made in a way that applies to one generation but fails to take into considerations of another generation. Such laws most of the time doesn't stay for a longer time. We can look at the American constitution for example of such a law. During the pre-civil war America, slavery was legal. But as time passed, people's view on slavery changed and such change engendered the Civil War in America. After the Civil War, the 13th Amendment was created to abolish slavery. This law is an epitome of flexible law that takes into considerations of all accounts. Laws should be like the 13th Amendment, applicable for all time and circumstances.
Globalization has transformed the world into a global village. High-speed transportation made it possible to be at one end of the world in the morning and at another end in the evening. As a result, most of the societies around the world today are cosmopolitan and have people from all around the world. As a result, laws cannot just take into account of the local people, but foreigners too. Laws should not be such that, it allows one culture to flourish while shunning another one. It has to accept every culture equally. We can look at the European Union for such an example of laws. After the EU was created, people living in those countries needed some common laws that can be applied to every country under EU. Similarly, in an age of globalization, we need laws that can account for all such diversities among people.
In a multicultural society, laws that are created taking considerations of only a fraction of the people are not valid. For a progressive society, multifaceted laws should be created taking into account its multifarious population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, while, as to, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91636363636 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8471844872 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449090909091 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 859.5 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0073294698 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192432395332 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057405754759 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541620825888 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136571374691 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338736838798 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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