Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
researches and innovation play a major role in the advancement of the country and a soceity as a whole.Th prompt suggest that Scinetis and researchers should focus theri research subjects according to the myriad number of people it will benefit. I mostly disgaree with the promt due to three reasons
To start with,Whenever a innovation or research is carried on,outcome of it is rarely known and definite. researches are mostly trial and error thing rather than a definite process so we cannot prescient the ultimate result of any reasearch. since result is itself unknow, how can we identify whether its going to benefit large number of people. For instance, a reasearch in determining the planets of our solar system is an ongoing process.we cannot predict the definite output of the same.Perhaps,we will find some new planets like we found Pluto many years ago or we don't. The destination is not defined. so to decide the focus of researchers based on the beneficiency of people and indirectly to the result is not viable.
Secondly, scientists and researched research subjects should be those where there interest is. it should not depend on external factors like number of people it benfits. For instance, if a student studing in PHD pursues his reearch subject as creaing 7Dimensional games but his area of expertise is in electronics and semiconductors , he won't be able to enjoy the hole reseacrh process beacuse it is something which he is doing just for the benfit of people and not following his interest path.Such a research can hardly be successful utimately not benefiting the people.
Third,if scientist and researches has to focus on subjects which will benfit the large proportion of sciety, then most of the rsearched will be reluctant to pursue their resarch thinking that his reearch subject may not benfit socety and he dneeds to find another which will benefit the large proportion of society.They will in dilllema most of the time with their subjects and this will restraint them to pursue their predilected subject relenttlessly.For instance, if Thomas edison has thought that his research on Bulb will not benfit large proportion of Society and have changed is research subject, we wont be able to enjoy lights in our life.
Though, scientist should focus on one thing since focusing on multiple things can lead to diversion of attention span and ultimately decreasig it. but researches subject are focused on a single subject only. They generally dont and sould not work on different subects at the same time.
Thus,Due to ambiguity of research outcome, dependenecy on researchers and sicentist personal interest and generated trepidness among scientists,I disagree that scientists works sould depend on how many people it iwll benefit. Though,I agree with the athor that researchers should focus on a single subject at a time and complete their research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of the country and a soceity as a whole.Th prompt suggest that Scinetis and resear...
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...elf unknow, how can we identify whether its going to benefit large number of people...
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...predict the definite output of the same.Perhaps,we will find some new planets like we f...
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...ple and not following his interest path.Such a research can hardly be successful uti...
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...tely not benefiting the people. Third,if scientist and researches has to focus o...
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...benefit the large proportion of society.They will in dilllema most of the time with...
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...he large proportion of society.They will in dilllema most of the time with their ...
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...their predilected subject relenttlessly.For instance, if Thomas edison has thought ...
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... focused on a single subject only. They generally dont and sould not work on different subects...
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...n a single subject only. They generally dont and sould not work on different subects...
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... on different subects at the same time. Thus,Due to ambiguity of research outcom...
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...erent subects at the same time. Thus,Due to ambiguity of research outcome, depen...
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...nd generated trepidness among scientists,I disagree that scientists works sould de...
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... how many people it iwll benefit. Though,I agree with the athor that researchers s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thus, as to, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16595744681 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84424364602 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504255319149 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.079549219 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.75 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690526489062 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234331516876 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243975576873 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0407465764534 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230059366239 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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