Leaders are created from the demands that are placed on them.
Leaders are the face of any country and represents what values, culture and ethics does that country hold. But in todays world, most of the leaders today are created by the demands or you can say expectation that the people hold from them. It happens to be very true and need to be so because the leader need to liten to the demands of the people. It is very essential for the developmet of the country.
First of all, take the example of the current Prime- minister of India "Narendra Modi". When he was selected in 2014, there were hopes high all across the country. Everyone expecting a change and the changes he has presented that he will do in his period of time. He promised the people of the curruption free country. He presented the idea of "Make in India". He also ensured the youth of the country for 2 crore jobs in his 5 years period of time and 20 new Smart Cities across the country. Some of his promises are done and some are still pending.
Now, take the example of "Donald Trump", the current President of United Staes of America. When he was elected in 2016, he promised people for the jobs for the native american people , new improved free trade policies and change in the usage of the GDP of the currentry in the correct direction. Also, we can consider the the current President of Russia, "Vladmir Putin". When he was newely elected, he promised the people of russia for collaborating the various seprated parts of the country and to be a leder that can give America a hard run.
But also, consider the case of President of Tibet,"Dalai Lama". He is a very religious person and also the chief-guru in the country. He treats everyone equally and is very polite and humble. People of that country hadn't selected him out of any expectation from him. But the very nature of him and because his is very religious.
At last, we can say that most of the countries have the leaders that are selected out of some kind of expectation or demand that people put on them. But there are some cases also where this demand policy does not exist. There are both kind of peole in the world but we can't neglect that most of the countries support this policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61616161616 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58342522066 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5253501962 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4782608696 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17391304348 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120000549727 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036453731867 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081008485206 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893485435282 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109806914533 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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