To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study it's major cities.
Societies in now these days consist of large variation of religion, culture, and ethinicities. As the times goes on, it is going to be more and more complex. But to understand the some charcteristics of a society, one should study the major cities. But this theory is not all full-proof and have some pitholes in it. As some societies are formed not by mere wish of the people there but may be due to partition, any kind of war or may be due to the transpotation of people from one place to another.
At first, let us take the eample of country like India, where a large variation of societies and ethinicities live together at the same time. The idea of the issue that visiting the major cities reveals a large number of important charcteristice about the various societies living there. In this case, as you see at the history of the country you'll discover some major religion like Hindu, Muslim as the main ruling parties. Most of the major cities are created mainly by these two religions. But a large number of religions live together there in India mostly because some minority religions are came as a mode of transpotation and setteled there pemanently like Parsi, Buddisht, Bengali and so on.
Furthermore, let take the example of Pakistan. There you'll find majorly Mosques and Gurudwara's but the population of Sikh community living there is minute. So, as in this case we can see that the major cities of a place doesn't reveal the all needed truth about the important charcteristics of the society. Most basic reason for this imparity in Pakistan is because of the reason that it is formed by partition. Likewise, take the example of Germany where in history the majority were Jews and Nazis. But after the rule of the Dictator Adolf Hitler, he changed the course of the history. Today the Jews in the Germany are rare to be found about. Again we see that the major cities doesn't reveal all the truth even as the most of infrastructural work done by the Adolf Hitler.
Putting all together, we can understand that in some scenarios the idea of the issue does workout but in many other cases it simply doesn't work. I agree that the major cities in the country helps to understand the societies but I would also like to add that all important charteristics doesn't get reveled from this method. In many cases, this theory doesn't even work where the country may be formed due to partition, war may be some other reason that the people of that paticular even don't want to live there at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, likewise, may, so, kind of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63963963964 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55011453963 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443693693694 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5613973031 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0952380952 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172417129671 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591209058422 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938446989373 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104350251762 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291132801803 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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