Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances,times and places.
Law's are being made to keep a country and it's various societies under one rule.so that , everyone can be treated equal and everyone have tha same rights.But sometimes the law's are have to be flexilble to keep on chnaging according to the changing world and it's requirements.As the law's are made to keep the people with peace and to listen to their demands.
At first , consider the case of India when the whole world was fighting from the market crisis and the India need to chnage it's policies to keep it's market safe. So , the former Prime minister Manmohan Singh announced a new ammendment in the law ,FDI .This particular step of Manmohan Singh save the country from getting market crashed and saved a lot of lives. So , from this we can understand that that the law's should have to be flexible acoording to the need's as the circumstances and time of that moment .
Also , we also know that in a platicular society the law's are implemented to ensure that the demand's of all the people can be equally heard .Like take the example of Chmparan district of India that changed the course of history. Government of that particular time have to change the law regarding tree plantation and new law's were implemented.So , from this example we can see that the law's can also be amended as per reqiuremenet of the people of a particular place to listen to their demands and requirements.
In the end , all we can conclude from the issue is that the law's should have to be flexilble to listen to demand of time , people of the country and the direction for the betterment of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60498220641 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59276410105 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466192170819 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4512673668 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.857142857 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1428571429 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181987751194 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952929022053 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582954745012 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117847753849 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211113453732 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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