laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances,times and places.
The law system of any country plays a major role in overall progress of any nation.any nation should be able to effectively implement his laws and makesure that the laws provide equity to their citizens.At the same time the authority has to be conscious of any manipulations of the law,constant effort has to be done in narrowing the loop holes in the law system.
One of the major aspects of efficient lawmaking is its flexibility, while implementing any law a broader aspect has to be taken into consideration.As they say “a half truth is a half lie” any decision shouldn’t be made just on the basis of what is seen but various circumstances,time and places has to be taken into account.Every case cannot be judged in a similar fashion because the resons behind certain acts can be completely different.
I would like to give an example of hit and run case where a drunk driver just drives over and kills someone whereas in other scenario a bus driver ranover the bus on someone because his bus brake were not working and not doing so would have resulted in large among the bus passangers.When we look at both the cases the crime commited is almost similar but the circumstances which to lead to these are different, therefore imposing the same punishment won’t be fair.
I agree that the laws need to be more flexible but it is has to be made sure that in doing so we are not providing the guilties a chance to misuse the power and set free. Eventhough its easier said than done I still firmly believe that the laws can be flexible enough so that the innocent or the less guilty aren’t treated in the same manner as the one’s who are guilty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onscious of any manipulations of the law,constant effort has to be done in narrowing the ...
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...pect has to be taken into consideration.As they say 'a half truth is a half l...
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...f what is seen but various circumstances,time and places has to be taken into account...
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...and places has to be taken into account.Every case cannot be judged in a similar fash...
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...nto account.Every case cannot be judged in a similar fashion because the resons behind certain acts ...
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...ulted in large among the bus passangers.When we look at both the cases the crime com...
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... innocent or the less guilty aren't treated in the same manner as the one&ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6835016835 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85759620867 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.49024253 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.2 118.986275619 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 23.4991977007 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.21951772744 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265318226627 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135811797039 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636720058741 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14495942864 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741029814415 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 14.1392134831 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 48.8420337079 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.1743820225 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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