Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your position y

In today's society, leadership skills are most valued as they cater to finding relevant solutions to the most persistent problems faced by the people. While leaders are often characterised by their ability to concede to the demands placed on them, a more suitable definition of a leader would be an individual who prioritises the interest of his or her subordinates before his own - an epitome of selflessness. The prompt suggests that leaders are created by demanding situations. Arguably, while such cases depict how a leader responds and his leadership abilities, it does not necessarily highlight the key traits that make him stand out amidst the crowd.
In order to further the argument that leadership skills are more intrinsic rather than caused by situations, it would be appropriate to cite the example of Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi, otherwise known as Mahatma Gandhi. Early India was marked by British colonialism and an imperious regime of the British monarchy. Towards the early 20th century, several factors such as the Second World War and resulting impoverishment of Indian natives led to growing discontent and the Indian Independence movement. Mahatma Gandhi was an evident proponent of the cause and as such displayed leadership abilities which united the people. However, what stands out as a key trait is his belief in non-violence. While his contemporaries, albeit great leaders too, took to arms to display their anger, Gandhi was vocal of a non-violent approach. As such because of his ideas of tolerance and his contribution to achieving Independence, he is often referred to as the Founding Father of India. Such key personality traits often lead the people in ways that are more subtle than others and helps in achieving outstanding results. While many situations might be demanding, the ability of an individual to inculcate amongst people his own belief serves to establish his leadership skills.
Furthermore, today's generations often attributes individuals the mantle of a "leader" based on his ability to resolve disputes in a nonpartisan way and mantain a cordial relationship with both parties involved. Such leadership skills are most evident of the individual's innate beliefs, his progressive personality and his understanding of complex situations. Predominant in the corporate industries, managers roles are often characterised by his leadership skills. As such, pertinent training is often given to develop abilities that help in the day-to-day work of an organization. One leadership skill that is most often talked about in such environments is "conflict management" which aims to resolve disputes and settle personal grievances of employees keeping in mind the overall impact such disputes have on the organization. However, even with substantial training, it is seen the managers with personal biases, prejudices are often inclined to take on the side which is more aligned to his beliefs. This serves to show that a manager, who is flawed in his innate beliefs, can not be taught or expected to respond appropriately to demanding situations due to constraints placed on his personality.
Indisputably, demanding situations often bring out the best in a person. Leaders have been shown to motivate people towards achieving goals, previously thought to be impossible. One such example from history is the war between 300 spartans and the whole Persian army, led by Leonidas of Sparta. Initially thought to be an improbable goal, the Spartans were successful is thwarting repeated attacks by Persian forces untill they were deceived by their own, who revealed a strategic location which could not be secured by the Spartans. However, in this aspect as well, it was Leonidas's belief in his capabilities that united the 300 Spartans who were almost victorious in their efforts.
In conclusion, the fact the demanding situations often bring out leaders amidst common people are not flawed. However, the leadership abilities of a person are the key factors that make him stand out amidst a crowd. Therefore, though the relation between leaders and demands exist, the latter does not necessitate the making of the former. A leader is deemed so, based on his abilities to resolve disputes, unite his subordinates and to lead people towards achieving goals. Some of these might be most evident during times of duress, nevertheless, even with substantial training an individual who is inclined to personal biases and prejudices can not be deemed a "leader"

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...biases and prejudices can not be deemed a 'leader'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3811.0 2235.4752809 170% => OK
No of words: 710.0 442.535393258 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3676056338 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1619594331 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08836036404 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 328.0 215.323595506 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461971830986 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1188.9 704.065955056 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8467806231 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.033333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669285149711 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225009694674 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289758322905 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462506437015 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214460989884 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 206.0 100.480337079 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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