Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
It is said that leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them; however, I disagree with this statement. I believe that leaders are not created by the demands that are placed on them because of a person’s personality and the pressure of the demands can be too much for them. For these reasons, leaders do not arise due to the demands that are put on them.
Firstly, personality plays a major role in a leader. For example, people who are introverted have personality traits that are not fit to be a leader, regardless of the demands that are placed on them. Introverted people are soft-spoken and shy, hindering them in their leadership. To be a leader, some level of extroverted personality traits should surface. To be an effective leader, they need to be able to speak out and communicate well with the team they are leading.
Secondly, the demands that are placed on a person can put too much pressure on them. Instead of taking on all the demands, one may crack under pressure and refuse to lead. For example, if the demands are too much, if there are too many demands to discuss, a person would not be able to fulfill each one. As a result, the person would feel unsatisfied and would not want to take up the leadership role in the future.
On the other hand, some people might become leaders due to the demands that are placed on them because they are forced into the position due to people believing they are best to fill the role. This may be true; however, if chosen to be leader, they might not be a strong leader.
People believe that leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them. Although leaders can arise from these conditions, I believe this statement is fault because of personality and the pressures of the demands that need to be met. For these reasons, I believe that certain demands do not create a leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up the leadership role in the future. On the other hand, some people might bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59104477612 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48895085617 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391044776119 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8842662162 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4705882353 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192542079141 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891590929832 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665019644937 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134295109991 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063298906422 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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