life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were a child? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Needless to say, one of the most important things which all people like to have, because of its enjoyment for them, is comfortable life. Therefore, all individuals have always been trying to provide easy and comfortable lives for themselves. In this regard, some people believe that our life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I agree with this view and I will discuss my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Some individuals believe that modern life is so harder than life in the past. Such people wrongly believe that in modern time because of complexity that our lives have individuals have to work hard in order to gain things which they want, while in the past people did simple works and they could have all necessary things which they wanted to lead glad life. Therefore, they have posed that we have less comfortable life than time which our grandparents were child. I disagree with this view, because when our grandparents were child they had to works in farms from early morning to midnight in order to have enough foods for eating, while in modern time we work around 8 or 6 hours per day and we can provide enough foods and even more than enough foods for our family. You can take my grandfather as the best example for this case. Once he told me that when he was child, he had to woke up very early and go to forests to hunt somethings for family that this work took round 14 hours per day and sometimes he could not find animals for hunting. Hence his family was forced to sleep without food. Thus, life in modern time is so easier than past.
Technologies help human to have easier life. This topic has been discussed by many sociologists that the majority of them believe that in this time we have more comfortable life than time that our grandparents were child, because in modern time we have access to technologies that do all difficult works for us and these technologies has increased our works' efficiency that means we have had more things to use. Hence these sociologists believe that invention of technologies is the most important thing in human history that release human from doing hard works. I agree with this arguments, because in the past human have to do all works with their hand that was so difficult for them, in modern time all works have done via technologies and human just control these technologies via computers. By way of illustration, I can refer to some statistics which have been published by many international organizations. Based on these statistics numbers of poor people have decreased from 80% to 20% of human population, because of a lot of foods which have been provided for individuals by presence of technologies. Thus, technologies help human to have easier life.
In brief, as I discussed in the previous paragraphs, some people have posed that life is easier in this time than time that our grandparents were child. I argued that this opinion is correct for a couple of reasons. First, in this time people work less hours than time that our grandparents were child, second, modern life is so easier than past because of different technologies which human invented to lead more comfortable lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 79.0 33.0505617978 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78237410072 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60473075425 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.381294964029 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5439893743 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.863636364 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243793482479 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100283462127 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103821901958 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204726856076 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614359439278 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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