Life today is much easier for new generations as compared to the older generations

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Life today is much easier for new generations as compared to the older generations.

Two different generations face different kind of challenges in their lives. The idea that life has becomes easier for present generation as compared to older generations is not entirely accurate. I do not think this assertion is correct because of the following three reasons.
The term ‘Comfort and Ease’ holds different meaning for everyone in different situations. For instance, since the introduction of mobile phones and cars, it seemed to some, that performing day to day tasks for today’s generation is much easier as compared to the older generation. However, if we take a closer look at the lifestyle today, we will be able to observe, that such gadgets are no more comfort creating items and they have turned into necessity. So the gadgets that were meant to increase the comfort and ease of day to day work have also increased the amount of work one has to get done within a single day.
Our capability to tackle difficulty level of everyday challenges also depends on constant practice. One person who is from a newer generation may find even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becomes tiring. On the other hand, there can be another person who enjoys driving a car to work because they had to walk 5 kilo meters to work every day twenty years ago. Hence introduction of cars and improved public transport made their life easier. Therefore, the level of difficulty of any task is relative to the capacity of the person who is performing it. This appetite of going through everyday challenges and patience to overcome certain difficulties has reduced in current generation.
In today's world, everyone is stressed due to increased competition in every field. Be it crucial things such as getting a job through several rounds of interviews or being up to date on the latest fashion. Everything is extremely different as compared to the times of our grandparents. Today, our generation stresses out at the minimal issues that our grandparents may have considered useless. For instance, in current generation, most of the children are burdened with the pressure of getting good grades in schools, whereas no one was concerned about grades in our grandparent's generations. Our grandparents usually tell us adventurous stories from their childhood. Can a child from 21st century imagine a life so free and full of imagination as it was then? The answer is no. This is due to the increasing global population and competition. Everyone today feels stuck in a rat race and blames capitalism for shrinking opportunities to spend time with families and friends.
In conclusion, life that both the generations have seen, are not roughly comparable and each have their own challenges. Our grandparents may had to walk for several kilo meters to send a message to their family but with the increased ease and resources, the need to send it quickly today has also ballooned. This shows that although life seems much comfortable today in terms of physical work, the pressure building on everyone's mind cannot be ignored making both generations facing equal level of distinct difficulties.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s for today’s generation is much easier as compared to the older generation. Howev...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becom...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ers to work every day twenty years ago. Hence introduction of cars and improved publi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04624277457 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82693565949 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0758546887 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.730769231 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9615384615 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310127534403 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797465472054 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123486516151 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197447118935 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103766726973 0.0667264976115 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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