Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Internet consists of all the information regarding every topic. Be it Wikipedia, that has replaced old books or the Youtube that has become a platform with numerous 'Do it yourself videos' to teach everyone, novel ideas and skills. The prompt introduces a debate on whether access to excess information on the internet is boon or a bane. I believe, that the information obtained from internet is very useful and even if it is in excess; does not mean we can't control it. The benefits of information obtained from internet overweight the disadvantages related to it because of the following three reasons.
Firstly, almost all the information is available on the internet today, leading to a dependency on this platform; be it students who search articles for their thesis or a person looking for a new job. From tiny to huge, all the information can be easily accessed within seconds. People usually use search engines to reach the information by employing an easy process. For instance, if someone wants to attend an event, they will search the respective event details on Google (a popular search engine) and will book the tickets as well, for that event online. Such facilities are present online for numerous activities nowadays. This example describes how the information from the internet has simplified lives. Internet has added comfort to people’s lives today, compared to earlier generations, as there were hardly any information and data present online.
Furthermore, photos and videos that people used to store in laptops earlier can be uploaded over the internet now. Hence, not only someone else's information but a person's own information can be accessed online. For example, many organizations have facilitated cloud technology that allows people to upload the data online for either free or minimal charges, saving space in their laptops. This facilitates makes storing huge amount of data in the same place, possible. This is a great example of how we can, not only access some crucial information required for day to day work but also our own data online through latest technology.
Lastly, a lot of information on the internet helps people save money. When people do not know how to perform a task, they can just search all the details over the internet, regarding how that task can be performed step by step. For instance, as per a new research conducted in USA, almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking by watching videos over Youtube. It is definitely a great way to learn new things. Apart from this example there are many other skills that can be learned from the internet; students do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and get a good job or promotion. Such applications of information present online, makes it worth some risks associated with it related to security and authenticity.
Some people may argue that, too much access to information online has many risks as well, such as theft of people's band details such as signatures and passwords, but aren't there at least some problems associated with everything that provides comfort. All the technical inventions and discoveries always have their merits and demerits. It is on us how we compare the both. Usually, if merits of a facility outshine the demerits then it is considered successful. Although, instances such as any personal information theft on the internet are rare, yet government has taken so many measures and constantly working towards improving the security in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en if it is in excess; does not mean we cant control it. The benefits of information...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... not only someone elses information but a persons own information can be accessed online....
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking by watching videos over Youtube. It is ...
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Line 7, column 548, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
...dents do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...s such as signatures and passwords, but arent there at least some problems associated...
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Line 9, column 643, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... working towards improving the security in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, second, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2941.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 579.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07944732297 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90534594407 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73928937663 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509499136442 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 933.3 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.507628676 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.035714286 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6785714286 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269115879744 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759949164733 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650363631064 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160835795305 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188511063754 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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