Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Internet today has information regarding every topic. Be it Wikipedia, that has replaced old books or the Youtube that has become a platform with numerous 'Do it yourself videos' to everyone novel ideas and skills. The prompt introduces a debate on whether access to excess information on the internet is good or bad for people. I think that the information obtained from internet is very useful and even if it is in excess; does not mean we can't control it. I believe the benefits of information obtained from the internet overweight the disadvantages because of the following three reasons.
Firstly, almost all the information regarding anything is available on the internet today, leading to a dependency on this platform to know about anything; be it students who want to find details regarding any thesis or a person looking for a new job. From small to big, all the information is present on the internet. Please usually use search engines to reach the information using a very easy process. For instance, if someone want to go to an event, they will search the event details on google( a popular search engine) and will also book the tickets for that event online. Such facilities are available for everything nowadays. This example describes how the information present on the internet - be it small information or excess; has simplified lives of people. Internet today has made the life of people so comfortable compared to earlier generations, as there was hardly any information and data present online.
Furthermore, all the photos and videos that people used to store in laptops can be uploaded over the internet. Hence, not only someone else's information but a person's own information can be accessed online. For instance, many organisations have facilitated cloud technology which allows people to upload the data that is supposed to be filling the space in their laptops, online. This makes storing large amount of data in the same place possible. This is a great example of how we can, not only access some crucial information required for day to day work but also our own data online through latest technologies.
Lastly, a lot of information over the internet helps people save money. This is in case when people do not know how to perform a task and they can just search over the internet all the details regarding how that task can be performed step by step. For instance, as per a new research conducted in USA, almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking through watching videos over Youtube. This is definitely a great way to learn new things. Apart from this example there are many other things that can be learnt over the internet, such as many students do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and get a good job or promotion. Such applications of information present online makes it worth some risks associated with it related to security and authenticity.
Some people may argue that too much access to information online has many risks as well, such as stealing of people's band details and identity theft such as signatures and passwords but aren't there at least some problems associated with everything that facilitates comfort. All the technical inventions and discovery always have their merits and demerits. It is on us how we compare the both. Usually, if merits of a facility out weights the demerits then it is considered successful. Although these instances such as any personal information theft on the internet are rare, yet government has taken so many measures and constantly trying to improve the security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en if it is in excess; does not mean we cant control it. I believe the benefits of i...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... easy process. For instance, if someone want to go to an event, they will search the...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... not only someone elses information but a persons own information can be accessed online....
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Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking through watching videos over Youtube. T...
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Line 7, column 587, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
...dents do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and ...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ft such as signatures and passwords but arent there at least some problems associated...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2995.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 602.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97508305648 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73296039995 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480066445183 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 955.8 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6195848523 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.964285714 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32142857143 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270202901815 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763710841812 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614063618519 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161681196366 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184768811149 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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