Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons
and/or examples that could be used to both support and challenge your position.
Determination, hard work and zeal are keys to success. One becomes successful if one has certain work ethics.Good work ethics can make one grow in one's career and in life also because success doesn't come when he is only good in professional life but he has to be good in his personal life too.
Although Luck also plays some role in success but it cannot be the only determining factor. Some people are so strict in notion of decorum that they always follow work ethics even when they do a small work. Suppose there is a manager of a team who does attend daily meetings, he gives freedom of doing work to his team members,still check progress of the work daily. He always help other team members also in their work. Though the person is manager doesn't mean that he can become senior manager if he doesn't follow rules.However, it is possible that because of luck he can
get senior manager position but relying completely on luck will not do good, but his hard work will surely give success.
Indeed, following work ethics is good as it helps in planning, setting feasible goals and achieving these goals as per the set timelines. For example there is a small business which makes handicraft products and they are planning to participate in say, entrepreneur competition next year, for that they must have certain amount of income which is a pre-condition for the competition. So employer and employees have to plan their work accordingly to deliver the products, make money before the competition registration starts. Based on their luck, they won't be able to participate. But
it is also true that sometimes people struggle to get somethings in their life but putting only small efforts they get what they want because of luck.
Lastly, people who are quite disciplined, want to follow their dreams and generally never depend on luck factor. They believe in hard work, following rigorous timeline to achieve something which they want. Suppose there is a student who is preparing for some competitive exam and his goal is to study for Masters in one of the top 5 universities of the world. The student has to be disciplined while doing his work. If he has will power to make his dreams come true, then he can, by
putting time and effort for cracking the exam. Although it is possible that because of luck he might get into rank one university instead of rank five university.
In my opinion, although luck plays some role in determining success but work ethics plays a major role because a person's work ethics shape his professional life, help in growing in life and make him go beyond his limits and achieve something which one thinks as infeasible goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, lastly, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7969762419 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57591609524 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466522678186 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0620656505 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.894736842 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149448668707 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558610450402 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481920544242 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781608258455 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496102645798 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.