Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Responsibility is a task, assigned to or taken by a person or a community or a corporation, that is expected to do. The responsibility seems a big word because if any good or bad happens, assignee is the one who should take charge of it. The responsibility taken by corporations is huge, the reason is it affects the society in one way or other.
Indeed, the corporations have a responsibility to promote well-being of the societies and the environment because corporations work for people. Products or services provided by these corporations are consumed by the societies. If we take examples of consumer-based MNCs like Apple provides us latest technology based products like laptop, mobile phones etc. HUL provides us fast moving consumer goods, Airtel provides us tele-communication services. These products are changing life of a consumer; making us gadget-friendly, we are using 4G/5G high speed internet, and consuming environment-friendly products. These products or services are consumed by more than one person of the societies gradually. MNCs also provide employment and better work culture to a large population of societies. So all this promote the well-being of the societies.
However, some people believe that corporations work for themselves. The only responsibility they have is to make more and more money. By supplying different kinds of products and services in the market, they acquire regular customers. If we take an example of Amazon, initially it was only an e-commerce website and now it has started giving us prime services at very low cost. The benefit of taking prime services gives you access to Amazon prime videos and music. Since consumer-base of this company is very large eventually it earns more and more profit.
In my opinion, I would say the corporations have responsibility to promote the well-being of the society. They are making the world a better place by making us aware of advanced technologies, by providing user friendly products and consumer goods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the latest'.
Suggestion: us the latest
...consumer-based MNCs like Apple provides us latest technology based products like laptop, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28348909657 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31180048277 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6548860245 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2631578947 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230678294159 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769468099985 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717288620321 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140037260963 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118199511228 0.0667264976115 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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