Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeingof the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe thatthe only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is tomake as muc

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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing

of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that

the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to

make as much money as possible.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your

own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing

and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Corporations are very essential organistaion of any society or town and society will face many difficulty if corporations do not operate in their. In my opinon, I mostly believe that corporation should take the responsibilities to promote the wellbieng of societies and enviornment for following reasons.

To begin with, as we all know that muncipal corporations operate in socities, as a result they have vast experience of societies and know pragmatic conditions enviornment. They are well trained to run the societies meticuously while considering current state of enviornment,which is rapdily detiorating.For instance, this year in mumbai the population index was highly decreased in this diwali festival, thanks to regulations encorporated by mumbai corportions which is eventually for the betterment of the society. The above example illustrate that corporations should lend a hand in development of better society.

Furthermore, this organisation has huge amount of skilled workers, those tackle with day today problems faced by people and tries to solve them. So, these people can also interact with public and try to spread awareness of many problems and ofcourse there solutions.Moreover, there should organisation to govern people and help the public to sove their difficulties.

It is true that corporations should make money as much as they could which subsequently affect the society directly or indirectly. Further, that money can be used in many ways for developing better corporations facilities. However, it is nothing of use if the organisation can not take effort for wellbieng of the society.

Thus, with my perspective the corporation has bound to earn lots of money as it will proliferate the economy of the town and eventually increase the country's economy. Nonetheless, they be responsible enough to think for the wellbieng of the socities and enviornment which is more important issue.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as a result, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52881355932 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33722917027 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4343347474 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.21951772744 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210767626533 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769384042221 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606503482359 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114428279223 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056894328257 0.0667264976115 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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