Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Corporations are very essential organization of any society or town and society will face many difficulties if corporations do not operate in there. In my opinion, I mostly believe that corporations should take the responsibility to promote the wellbeing of societies and the environment for the following reasons.
To begin with, as we all know that municipal corporations operate in societies, as a result, they have vast experience of societies and know pragmatic conditions environment. They are well trained to run societies meticulously while considering current state of the environment, which is rapidly deteriorating. For instance, this year in Mumbai the population index was highly decreased in this Diwali festival, thanks to regulations incorporated by Mumbai corporations which is eventually for the betterment of the society. The above example illustrates that corporations should lend a hand in the development of a better society.
Furthermore, this organization has a huge amount of skilled workers, those tackle day-to-day problems faced by people and tries to solve them. So, these people can also interact with the public and try to spread awareness of many problems and of course their solutions. Moreover, there should organization to govern people and help the public to solve their difficulties. For instance, when the corporation will regulate some rules such as prohibiting to litter anywhere, try to convey an idea of using the public vehicle and so on, for wellbeing and enforced people to follow they then automatically the environment will be stabilized and humans will live longer.
It is true that corporations should make money as much as they could which subsequently affects the society directly or indirectly. Further, that money can be used in many ways for developing better corporations facilities. However, it is nothing of use if the organization can not make an effort for wellbeing of society.
Thus, with my perspective, the corporation was bound to earn lots of money as it will proliferate the economy of the town and eventually increase the country's economy. Nonetheless, they are responsible enough to think for the wellbeing of the societies and environment which is a more important issue.</span><br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...abilized and humans will live longer. It is true that corporations should make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53389830508 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54003382889 2.79657885939 127% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539548022599 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8083982559 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.21951772744 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228481518162 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774877840144 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676173409869 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130145778054 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446799317747 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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