Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeingof the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe thatthe only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is tomake as muc

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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing

of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that

the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to

make as much money as possible.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your

own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing

and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

The environment in which businesses and organizations operate is vital to how much money the corporations would make and the development of the host community. The prompt recommend that some people was of the opinion that the organisations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeign of the community in which they operate, while others believed that the organisation’s aim is to make profit provided they abide by rule of the community. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the view that suggested there should be a social responsibility to the host community by the organizations because of two reasons.

To begin, the community play a pivotal in how much profit a business will make in that the citizen of the society will directly patronize the businesses there by providing a ready-made market for the business. For instance, a food canteen that makes food readily available in the early hours of the day will need working class people and students that goes to work and school early as her customers. The business could organize a free food day (maybe once in a month) as incentive to her direct customers which will improve the relationship of their customers. The business can also donates writing material and books to the students as a social responsibility which will make the business most sought after in the community.

Secondly, the host community could safeguard the business in case of any turmoil that mayocuur within the community. For instance, an oil industry located in a restive environment where there is militancy and kidnapping, could face the wrath of the militant activities if the company lack a good relationship with the host community. The company could establish vocational center where the restive militant can be train and quipped with facilities to start their own life rather than being a militia. The company could have created other social amenities to the host community which will serve as very good reason to protect the business by the citizen in case of any uproar.

Of course, some might argue that since the company have fulfill the legal responsibility to the government, the only aim is to make profit. But the community in which the government is not catering for would not allow such company to flourish even if the company fulfil all the legal duty. Business should make the social responsibility a very integral part of their business plans in other to make a very good profit, and to create a safe and enabling environment of operations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The environment in which businesses and organizations op...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'class'' or 'class's'?
Suggestion: class'; class's
...arly hours of the day will need working class people and students that goes to work a...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fulfilled'.
Suggestion: fulfilled
...might argue that since the company have fulfill the legal responsibility to the governm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00959232614 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90036238651 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450839328537 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1830476672 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7857142857 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189282040039 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068874502534 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839391247488 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126966501432 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101404163192 0.0667264976115 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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