A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until the enter college

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A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until the enter college

College students should be given the liberty to choose the curriculum they intend to study irrespective of the government designed national curriculum.

Education is not about forcing a particular branch of knowledge on students, but it is centered around knowledge gained from instinct and personal interest. A student might decided to pick a curriculum that best fit his/her interest in future there by leading to excellent performance and vibrancy. More importantly, A student might decided to study medicine in higher institution while the government designed college curriculum will not provide for basic courses related to biology and chemistry. The curriculum might not provide a required background in studying medicine. Such student won't find the curriculum helpful which might daunt his/her dream of becoming a medical doctor.

Also, in the global world today, where technology has taken over all spheres. A curriculum devoid of technlogical applications will not flourish compare to a currculum developed around technology. Students that prefered a technological oriented career and the neccessary background is missing in the national college curriculum won't find the national curriculum appaeling, thereby leading to wrong and unimpressive performance in the college degree.

This said national curriculum might have its own benefits-maybe to create a balalnce in the level of education among tribes but it wont be appealing to students whose career required more than national curriculum thereby limiting thier understanding of the basic required for their desired course of study at the higher institution.

Ultimately, student should be allowed to make a free choice of courses in thier college curriculum so as to find a leverage in their career at the higher citadel of learning which will bring a more professionalism in their career and create an excellent and vibrant personel required in the development of the nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of courses in thier college curriculum so as to find a leverage in their career...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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...of courses in thier college curriculum so as to find a leverage in their career at the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, while, as to, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63513513514 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03550446298 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7976670395 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.636363636 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383322500975 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145654825675 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10779609432 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238149151397 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658072955456 0.0667264976115 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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