The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Luxury, by definition, is living way above average, having all one desires above what can be normally earned. After careful consideration of the prompt, I am in strong support that luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
First of all, the word 'competition' is not known by one that lives in luxury. Having a sense that resources are limited and as such will be given to one that is most deserving of it, is one thing that pushes us to be on our feet always. But to one who lives in luxury and convenience, there is certainly no need to have a competitive spirit when you can afford anything seamlessly or they feel they have someone or something they can easily fall back to.
Secondly, Children who grew up in affluent homes cannot relate to hardship. Hardship has a way of resetting one's mind. An average man is always thinking of what do to best or how better to restrategize in other to move into the affluent. Through this, he comes up with creative approaches which eventually might become favorable. Such a feeling of desiring more has a way of developing our critical mind and as well making us strong to face the realities of life. However, A child who lived in an affluent will grow up to think life is all bed of roses and if faced with a kind of difficulty or challenge will easily give in or want to cry out for help immediately.
Today, there are several cases of people wanting to commit suicide. On a closer look at why they attempt to take one's life, it is found they want to give in to life pressures. Someone who is living knowing that life is not always as described in fairy tales will definitely know that despite there is a cloudy day today, tomorrow could be sunny.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that exposure to luxury and convenience has a way of making us grow into weak and independent individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... thing that pushes us to be on our feet always. But to one who lives in luxury and con...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...closer look at why they attempt to take ones life, it is found they want to give in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58139534884 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66154637322 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2065967972 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164975545676 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532009730401 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823505731244 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989235097275 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685994852198 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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