The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
The main purpose of history is to examine the past times and learn from the events that took place.Most of the people often feel studying history as waste of efforts as it serves no purpose in current situation.The statement asserts that the benefit of history is to erase the difference in lifestyle of current generation from earlier times.In my opinion,the assertion made by statement is true to some extent but that main benefit of history is as specified above to learn from past mistakes.I would like to substantiate my view in following ways.
history deemed as one of crucial subject is included in every academic curriculum for primary and high school children.While students doesn't have have a liking for it as a subject as it was boring and often felt irrelevnt for them.But the educational system failed in inculcating the main goal of history as a subject and its advantages.Histoy had mostly been occupied by wars,rebellions,reolutions or colonial rules.So most of part of it was obviously different from today's lifestyle which is the fact that everyone is aware of.But the core concept is to know the reasons what led to those circumstances and not to repeat them again.In brief manner,it provides a way for people to learn from their mistakes and develop sense of maturity.
Moreover,the assumption inherent to the statement that termed difference in lives of people in earlier times to current generation as illusion is definitely not acceptable.history provides a clear picture of how the social and economic conditions prevailed and affected the lives of people.For instance,if we take a deep dive into more specific events,gender discrimination is one of substantial part of history.The lives of women before were under control of men and faced severe oppression.To the contrary,today women are truly empowered and made progress in all aspects of life.This small example clearly depicts the distinction of lifestyles between earlier and present times.
Even with all this being said,it is not appropriate to discord the fact that living conditions are same and hardly subjected to any changes in some contexts.Consider caste system in india that still prevails to date.castes has been dividing people and discriminating people before india got Independence from colonial rule of Britain.In fact,the British found it easy to rule india with help of caste system.And peoples still todsy give high priority to castes in marriages and also to provide some social priviliges.Additionally,caste system led to resrvation system in india where it favours only a particular community of people to attain jobs easily than others.This is what history failed in preaching effectively.
To conclude,the history is mainly representation of our past to make sure we remember the lessons and never to disappear the truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in brief, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32962138085 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39904022294 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547884187082 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 23.0359550562 386% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.331968577 60.3974514979 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 478.6 118.986275619 402% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.8 23.4991977007 382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8 5.21951772744 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294283831576 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144671535944 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691602283847 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144671535944 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691602283847 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.6 14.1392134831 344% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.32 48.8420337079 -56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 12.1743820225 322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.52 8.38706741573 149% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 11.2143820225 335% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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