Claim: Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.Reason: It is inappropriate — and, perhaps, even cruel — to use public resources to fund the arts when people's basi

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... be accessible to each and every citizen of a nation.There may be different reaso...
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...metimes some people are deprived of food,shelter and clothing.Govenment as a responsible...
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...e deprived of food,shelter and clothing.Govenment as a responsible institution elected by...
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...responsible for welfare of the citizens.However,that doesnt mean in order to provide go...
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...ason put forth by the author. Firslty,a nation can be described as a complex so...
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...oday as it encompasses numerous cultures,beliefs and lifestyles that coexist in a small ...
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...ifestyles that coexist in a small place.In addition to that,economy of is another ...
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...ch need to be guarded by the government.Therefore,there is lot of uncertainity on problem...
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...ty on problems that could arise anytime.There are countless reasons a significant por...
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... to basic needs such as natural calamity,economic depression,lack of skills,lack of infra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7225433526 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.12320692062 2.79657885939 147% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 23.0359550562 373% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.00956614 60.3974514979 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 495.0 118.986275619 416% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.5 23.4991977007 368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 5.21951772744 551% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288769955063 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175561960013 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846208669479 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175561960013 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846208669479 0.0667264976115 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.8 14.1392134831 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.73 48.8420337079 -67% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.92365168539 268% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 12.1743820225 322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.08 12.1639044944 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.74 8.38706741573 152% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 11.8971910112 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 11.2143820225 325% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.