People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
risk is meant to be taken in order to achieve something that comes at a great price.people often fear on taking risk as they are afraid of the consequences.The above statement asserts that people should undertake risks only after considering the consequences.In my view,the statement is very much true because only after assessing the potential outcomes of risky action a person decides whether it is something that he can bear them or not.
Firstly,risks are common in lot of jobs and professions but still people intend to accomplish their task.For example,consider the life of a soldier at border.The aspirants of armed forces prepares themselves for any kind of situation like working in land mine areas,carrying anti terrorist operations,surviving and adopting to all weather conditions..etc.A typical recruitment process for joining the armed forces is he/she is supposed to sign the declaration that armed forces authorities are not responsible for any kind of damage or loss of life.only after agreeing concurring to all the conditions ,he/she will be given green signal to be appointed as a soldier.This implies that a person who is ready to take up soldier job has calculated all the consequences before taking up the risky job.
Secondly,there are lot of stories in business industry where many organisations and successful entrepreneurs are hailed a risk takers.For instance, consider the example of SpaceX organisation that overcame all it's failures initiallly and took a shot for final atempt by putting all it's resources.The chief executive officer of the organisation Mr Elon Musk himself accepted that there is lot of risk involved since all funds were exhausted and decided to go for one final attempt with loan he borrowed.This shows that before taking a risk,there is well defined estimation of what are the consequences that could emerge and how could they be tackled.
Futhermore,the risks itself means going beyond limits and compromising on comforts so that it will lead to do or die situation.Mostly people tend towards taking risks when they assume the chances to be bleak.Whatever the consequences may be,they will express utmost dedication without fearing the result of taking the risk.
To conclude,risks can be described as well calculated actions that are taken after examining all the consequences instead of playing a safe game.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35828877005 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32115699546 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601604278075 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.845922641 60.3974514979 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 400.8 118.986275619 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.8 23.4991977007 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.2 5.21951772744 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187653437712 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109553740618 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100160094212 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109553740618 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100160094212 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 14.1392134831 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 48.8420337079 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.66 8.38706741573 139% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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