Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
critical judgement is necessary in all kinds of fields today to keep the performance and quality at a higher level.every profession or occupation has some limits and boundaries which are followed by pioneer in that field to classify the work.The above statement asserts that only judgement by expert in thier respective fields has more value which is appropriate in my opinion.
Firslty,consider any sport like soccer or baseball or cricket where every team is appointed with a coach or a mentor whose responsibility is to guide the players in right path and judge their game.Almost all the trainers or coaches are experienced ones in their respective fields who can analyse others game easily and find out the weak points.For example in cricket,there was no concept of providing a coach to every team until a decade ago where the experts of the game felt that it is good to have a person who knows the game well and can guide the new players in improving their skills.
Furthermore,there are financial advisors who are pioneers in predicting stock market and advocate people in investments that result in huge profits.Usually,there are more prevalent in stock markets guiding people in purchasing shares because a normal person who doesn't have profound knowledge in the game of stock market cannot make right decision at all times.Therefore,it is better to take an advice from experts like financial advisors who would have lot of experience in gambling with shares and possess enough knowledge in buying and selling shares at right time.
Moreover,the concept of education system is also based on same critical judgement.For instance,consider whole hierarchy of office in a high school or a university where the main job of principal or Head of the department or professor is to carefully monitor the academic performances of students and to make judgements so that teaching system could be more productive and have a better reach to students.This helps in inferring that experts know their field very well and might have gone through various experiences which would obviously help them to adjudicate other's work.
To conclude,the provided statement has very much truth to it as it is visible in almost every profession today to get the work done in satisfying manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15363881402 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12388805131 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.765636313 60.3974514979 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.4 118.986275619 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.2 23.4991977007 316% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 5.21951772744 360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180982244259 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918329723053 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580271167204 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918329723053 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580271167204 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 14.1392134831 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 12.1743820225 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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