many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another
Discoveries and creations are symbols for human society. Human ensure their sustainability by provide innovative discoveries or creations to the society continuously. Because humans’ enthusiasm on new discoveries and creations, they made themselves distinct to other animals. During the process of innovation, there are some discoveries are accidental, thus someone proposed that many important discoveries or creations are accidental because it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another. However, I do not agree with this statement.
Admittedly, some discoveries are accidental. During the research process, it is common that there are some productive errors or accidents that give scientists surprises. Post-it notes are widely known. It is invented by accidents. There was a 3M chemist named Dr. Spencer Silver. When he was attempting to invent a super adhesive, by accident, he created a super weak adhesive instead, which can be only used to adhere things temporarily. This invention is very useful in a study or work places. It brought many conveniences to common lives.
Although some discoveries are accidental, most of important inventions are created in purpose. For example, Thomas Edison began to work on the electrical illumination, because that he wanted to find a way to compete the gas and oil light. He dedicated his energies on this experiment. His first light test can last 14.5 hours. After being granted the patent, he continued his experiments. He changed materials, and after more than thousand experiments, he eventually invented an electrical light that can last 1200 hours. This invention is very important to humans’ lives. Edison conducted experiments totally in purpose.
Additionally, if saying many important discoveries are accidental, it is very disrespectful for the contributions that those scientists made. Even though some discoveries are accidental, they need scientists to make further study to ensure them can be beneficial for humans’ society. This process also needs scientists to satisfy their time and energies on the projects. Marie Curie and her husband’s discovery of radium is an accident. When the Curies studied the mineral earlier, after they removed the uranium from it, they found that the remaining material was still radioactive. Then radium was discovered. However, the Curies used the rest of their lives to dedicate on radium’s studies. Not only did the Curies make huge contribution to humans’ lives and society progress, Marie curie also satisfied her life because of the long-term exposure to radium. Because of the Curies’ tremendous contributions to the society, no one can say the discovery of radium is just an accident.
Overall, most of important discoveries are created in purpose. There are not invents are totally accidents. Scientists contributed their time and energies, some of them even dedicated their lives on the invents. People should respect to those scientists who made contributions to the progress of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 432, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... changed materials, and after more than thousand experiments, he eventually invented an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2627.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5656779661 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09725691459 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497881355932 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9588022189 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2647058824 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211675200272 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496614283421 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115559815144 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128003647562 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156612338416 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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