Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As far as I'm concern, the claim that many important discoveries or creation are accidental is questionable. Although many great men said that ideas about their greatest achievements came from accident, it is common that we ignore about the preconditions and the hardwork they put in to achieve these accomplishment. If we are able to consider all the facts, it is easy to conclude that most of discoveries or creations are not created by accident, as discussed below.
In the field of science, it is common that people think about the story about how Sir Issac Newtown discovered the laws of gravity by sitting under a apple tree when they think about scientific research. However, the research Sir Issac Newtown conducted is far complicated than simply observed the fall of apple because the primrary challenge people have at that time is about the air resistence. The knowledge and mathmatical tools Sir Issac Newtown has allows him to derivite the mathmatical model of the physics and countless number of scientist has tried to desgin the experinment to confirm his theory. Like many of the greatest scientific discovery today, the theory of physics is not discovered by accidents.
In the field of engineering, it is no doubt that most of the creations are not accidental. For example, we all know about the story about how Thomas Edison invent the light bulb. He tried thousands of material and finally found the one that suited to endure the extreme tempreture. However, the truth is that Edison is not the only one who proposed the material. The desicovery of the light bulb material may be accidental, but the invention of the light bulb is not. It is thousands hours of desgin, test, and manufacture that allows the light bulb would be avaliable to the world. Almost all the engineering desgin we know today, small or large has been carefully desgined and modified by thousands of engineers so that it can be reliable to use. The engineering achievement of modern society is no accident at all.
In the field of fine art, the creations of most paintings and sculpture is no accient as well. Although the inspiration may be accidental, but the final painting is the product influenced by not only the artist himself, but also the time when the pieces is created. During the period of The Renaissance, there are large of number of painting and sculptures that depict the religon figure. Although it may be greatly influenced by the personality of the artist's inspiration, the common traits of these pieces suggest they are influneced by the time and the ethos of the society.
In summary, there are almost no accident for all the greatest discoveries or creations happened in human history. Although it might be different in a way how people present the final result, but the achievement is mostly because of hardwork instead of luck.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
As far as Im concern, the claim that many important ...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this accomplishment' or 'these accomplishments'?
Suggestion: this accomplishment; these accomplishments
...and the hardwork they put in to achieve these accomplishment. If we are able to consider all the fac...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the discoveries') or simply say ''most discoveries''.
Suggestion: most of the discoveries; most discoveries
... the facts, it is easy to conclude that most of discoveries or creations are not created by acciden...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ed the laws of gravity by sitting under a apple tree when they think about scient...
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Line 13, column 454, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
...ly influenced by the personality of the artists inspiration, the common traits of these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in summary, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9377593361 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77359743908 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458506224066 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8046401873 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819978915167 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294800961793 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034705105871 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480450298717 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380237059905 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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