"Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak"
Language has been of the most aspect of convivial being like Humans from primordial times and has developed ever since. Initially starting out with gesticulating our thoughts and emotions we self taught ourselves to produce sounds to communicate. As of now we are effectivey able to articulate our feelings and emotions. But there are several languages that are not ubiquitously known and in this modern age are sinking into abyss, with fewer people using them to communicate with each other. I strongly agree that these lesser known languages are indeed getting lost amongst the popular ones out there and many might have already become extinct, before we knew they even existed. There are two main reasons for my thoughts aligining with the above notion.
New generations are hardly given these lesser known languages as choices to choose amidst the well known ones. If they are not broached about the existence of such lesser known languages at the first place then there hardly is a chance that one would go out of their way to acquire the adeptness in some lesser known language. For example, in schools the most common compulsory mode of imparting education is English and based on the location the regional languages, like German, French and Spanish in European countries. It is very less likely that students are provided with options to take up languages like ancient greek and eastern europian languages. For most cases the student remain apathetic to the existence of such languages. This elucidates the discrimination against these lesser know languages at a very preliminary but salient stage where it could have been introduced to a huge mass of population, and it could have gained significant attention and vociferous speakers fluent in that tongue.
Due to the current global scenario of jobs and markets, the widely known languages have been almost mandated in most cases as an qualification for entrance. It was seen in a worldwide survey that Languagaes like English dominated the job market and had the second largest population of speakers in a country like India which has numerous other regional languages ascribed to it already. India has the second largest number of english speakers after the United States. This growth of English speaking has led to significant and noticeable reduction in the number of native language speakers and lowered awareness about the existence of native languages. The languages that were even lesser known in the deeper reaches of the villages of India now stand at the edge of extinction. This goes to show that the wider known languages dominate job opportunities and the market, or the economies around the world to such an exhillarating extent that people are compelled to learn them sacrificing on the lesser known languages.
Though one might argue that the lesser known languages are separetely promoted by nations as important part of their culture, it can be easily understood that those foible promotions have the maximum reach to a few hundred of people of attending those traditional events. The so called "Promotion" of the lesser known languages that one might cite are but mere displays of historic cultural and tradtional displays that are inadequately potrayed. Thus it is evident from the above reasons that lesser knoen languages are indeed are being lost as lesser are people are made aware of them ultimately lesser people speaking them, in presence of the large and in some case economy dominating languages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 608, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
... amongst the popular ones out there and many might have already become extinct, before we ...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s to choose amidst the well known ones. If they are not broached about the existen...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e been almost mandated in most cases as an qualification for entrance. It was seen...
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Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aches of the villages of India now stand at the edge of extinction. This goes to ...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...isplays that are inadequately potrayed. Thus it is evident from the above reasons th...
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Line 4, column 538, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... that lesser knoen languages are indeed are being lost as lesser are people are mad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2932.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 570.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14385964912 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71913072489 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 939.6 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3836177036 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.619047619 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352788382844 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863603313303 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777413751676 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198354527657 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479327414532 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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