Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.
Language is a media of expressing thoughts. Every language has its own pride, essence and self-worth. Every language, be it lesser-known or mostly-known, should be reserved. The prompt asserts that, due to less usage of world’s lesser-known languages, with the passage of time, those language are being extinct and government should take action to protect those languages from being extinct. In my opinion, I partially agree with the fact of preserving lesser-known languages and government’s interference in that action for 2 reasons.
On one hand, every nation’s language bears the cultural heritage, tradition, rituals of that nation .Besides, every native language has different spiritual meaning. Language represents identity of a nation, people of the nation or city. If any language disappears, the culture, traditions, rituals of that country disappear too. Even if the lesser-known languages are of not much practical use in practical world, there are still many nations that use their native language to communicate. For instance, one of the least spoken language Greek is used by 13.5 billion people in this world and nations like Italy,Turkey and Greece are using this language fluently in their daily life. Therefore, it should be a matter of utmost concern to reserve the lesser- known languages to keep the cultural heritage,tradtions and rituals intact.
On the other hand, in this practical and technological world many intricate problems such as war, lacking of food, education and treatment are arising every now and then. Saving a language from extinction, apparently, isn't one of those practical and critical problems that requires government’s attention. Private organizations, instead of government, may work on the task of reserving those languages.
In summary, preserving an indigenous language is absolutely an important and worthy goal that would help preserving cultures, traditions, rituals, self-worth and spirituality of a nation.But,the task should be done by private organizations or people instead of government as the resource and time of Government is plays,undoubtedly, more important role in solving critical and practical problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
Language is a media of expressing thoughts. Every language ...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'those languages'?
Suggestion: this language; those languages
...wn languages, with the passage of time, those language are being extinct and government should...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...itage, tradition, rituals of that nation .Besides, every native language has diffe...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...age, tradition, rituals of that nation .Besides, every native language has different sp...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Turkey
...ple in this world and nations like Italy,Turkey and Greece are using this language flue...
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Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tradtions
... languages to keep the cultural heritage,tradtions and rituals intact. On the other ha...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...od, education and treatment are arising every now and then. Saving a language from extinction, app...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...a language from extinction, apparently, isnt one of those practical and critical pro...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to preserve' or 'preserve'.
Suggestion: to preserve; preserve
...portant and worthy goal that would help preserving cultures, traditions, rituals, self-wor...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...self-worth and spirituality of a nation.But,the task should be done by private orga...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...f-worth and spirituality of a nation.But,the task should be done by private organiza...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , undoubtedly
...resource and time of Government is plays,undoubtedly, more important role in solving critica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in summary, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6737804878 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24874563951 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2534799809 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.066666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39408554319 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144268062978 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677555662308 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221316418456 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110186302596 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.