Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.
The author emphasizes that the government should preserve the languages which are on the verge of becoming extinct. The government should take necessary actions so that these languages exist in future. The languages, specially the languages of indigenous people are of very rich and we all should make endeavor so that they do not vanishes. I totally agree with the comment of the author and in the next few paragraphs, I will put forward my views regarding the recommendations of the author.
Firstly, the government as the supreme authority of the state should have the responsibility to prevent the languages and cultures which are in the danger of becoming extinct. The government should pass relevant laws, regulations as well as provide funding and creating necessary institutions for preserving the heritage, cultures, and languages. These things are the great assets of a nation, it represents the country to the outside world. Any person from other country can have a glimpse about a country by getting a overview about the country’s culture, heritage etc. That's why the government as well as the every citizens must be well aware of preserving of these great assets.
Secondly, The future generations must know about the country’s cultures, norms, languages. Otherwise they will fail to fulfill the expectations of the country. In Bangladesh, we people from different religious, classes, indigenous people and all these people are living harmoniously from ancient time. We have more than 200 types of indigenous people live in Bangladesh, especially in the hill tracks area. All of these tribal people have their own languages, cultures, norms, values and they worship different gods. Now these indigenous people are coming to cities for their livelihood. They have very few scope to practice their cultures and these peoples are also migrating to different parts of the world. So, unless taking any actions in near future these languages, cultures will vanish. Many languages from different parts of the world have already vanishes and a large number of languages are in on the list which are going to extinct near future. That's why the respective government should take necessary actions to prevent these languages from vanishing from the world.
Every people of the country should be well aware of history, cultures, languages of their respective countries. Unless appropriate patronization from the apex body of the country, it is quite impossible to preserve these rich histories, languages. Because the task of preserving the languages involved fair amount money and it is not possible for any individual to fund this expenditure. The government as the supreme executive body of the country have the every right to make decisions where to fund and how this fund can be arranged. Therefore, the government take necessary actions for preventing these languages from being extinct. At the same time, the people of the country also perform their duties of preserving this rich assets.
Finally, corroboration between government and citizen must need to prevent the indigenous languages from becoming extinct. It’s the responsibility of the government to make necessary arrangements and funding for making such kind institutions but it is the duty of every citizen to ensure whether these institutions are performing efficiently or not and only then we can preserve these rare languages from becoming extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2899.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33885819521 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87948324283 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41620626151 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 906.3 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6337634477 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.37037037 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366617952312 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118918070787 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958735976514 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2369068791 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00704426242032 0.0667264976115 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.