Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important
Mass media and the internet has heavily influenced today's population. Our lives became unimaginable without it. With myriad of information available, it is hard to focus on just one thing but people make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information for important information.
During the archaic times, people had limited resources and hence they ferreted through those resources for the required knowledge. But today, people have access to amply information. It is hard to go through every resource available to us in current times. So, people often sort out important information from the humongous amounts of information. This enables them to select from the best and authentic ones out of the myriad information available and hence, they can focus only on the significant information.
The information available on the mass media and internet is of wider scope which means that earlier people aimed to gain information on the fields or topics that they are aware of, but now a days people are presented with so many opportunities to learn about many new things that they have never heard of. People are provided with many opportunities where they can explore any field. Hence, mass media and internet has caused people's attention to increase by providing them interesting learning opportunities.
The humongous amount of information can sometimes be a boon and sometimes bane. While, people are provided with great opportunities to explore many new things, it also possess some distractions for people. People may explore many different things at the same time and there by hinder the overall learning process. Hence, it may sometimes not be beneficial for the fickle minded.
Hence, the mass media and the internet have caused people's attention spans to get shorter but nevertheless, people make up for it by sorting through large quantities of information and find out what's important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...s or topics that they are aware of, but now a days people are presented with so many oppor...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'possesses'?
Suggestion: possesses
...ies to explore many new things, it also possess some distractions for people. People ma...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ractions for people. People may explore many different things at the same time and there by hi...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
... peoples attention spans to get shorter but nevertheless, people make up for it by sorting throu...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... quantities of information and find out whats important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23870967742 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82497410042 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.2027079741 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395858587228 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124238965497 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112901832295 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250345404831 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116915421159 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.