Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

While I disagree with the claim that men and women, because of their inherent physical differences,

are not equally suited for many tasks, it is necessary to analyze some questions like by many are we

talking about all the type of tasks, are we considering some age group of men and women and does the task

include security. Today men and women are excelling and working in parallel in many fields but the above questions need to thought before reaching any conclusion.

Firstly, today in most of the tasks we do not differentiate men and women on the basis of physical differences.

A woman can work at the office like a man, she can travel the world alone and even she can work at a construction site where a lot of physical work is required. But the real question is does the task include her security? If a woman is not safe and does not feel secure then she would not take up that task even if she is perfectly fit for it. If there

is a task of working late night then a man will be preferred because there the question of her safety is raised.

Secondly, if we think of the age of women and men, then today women are also working in their old age. In some places we can see that man at the house is ill and his wife is working and ready to take up any task for work. It depends on the

stamina and energy in the body at old age and this is not dependent on physical differences.

Lastly, there are some tasks where a woman will not prefer to work like coal mines. Although, if a woman is ready then she can be given that task but very few women prefer those types of tasks because there are many chemicals and gases present that can affect her and her children. Women also think emotionally so this is also a factor in her preferences.

Men may not have any problem in taking up such tasks.

Hence, in my opinion, in most places, men and women are not differentiated based on their physical differences. Still, it depends

on the environment and the above-mentioned factors that determine which task is preferred by whom.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he is perfectly fit for it. If there is a task of working late night then a man...
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...any task for work. It depends on the stamina and energy in the body at old age and t...
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...sical differences. Still, it depends on the environment and the above-mentioned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, talking about, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45646437995 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44073450549 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437994722955 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7611509855 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331680352245 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108329646909 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130729227661 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148128917973 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118140567509 0.0667264976115 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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